Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문장이 끊어져 있어 이해하기 어렵습니다. 문장을 완성하고, 중복된 표현을 줄이며, 명확한 이유를 제시하는 연습이 필요합니다.

예시: Yes, I like singing because I have been passionate about it since elementary school. I believe I am quite good at it compared to others, which makes it enjoyable for me.

제안: 문법과 어휘 사용이 부정확하며, 문장이 단절되어 있습니다. 간결하고 명확한 문장으로 경험을 구체적으로 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.

예시: Yes, I have some experience learning to sing. For example, I joined a singing program as an after-school activity when I was in middle school.

제안: 답변이 불완전하고 문장이 끊어져 있어 의사 전달이 어렵습니다. 자신감을 표현하고, 이유를 명확히 하며, 문장을 완성하는 연습이 필요합니다.

예시: Well, I am not sure because singing is just a hobby for me to relax. I don't have much confidence to sing in front of others.

제안: 내용이 불명확하고 문장이 연결되지 않아 이해하기 어렵습니다. 구체적인 예를 들고, 문장을 논리적으로 연결하는 연습이 필요합니다.

예시: Yes, I definitely agree. I have seen programs where people sing together, and it clearly makes them happier than before.

× Yes, I like singing. Because. I think I am good at singing. More than others. So since I was. A Since I was in the elementary school I loved to sing in.

✓ Yes, I like singing because I think I am better at singing than others. Since I was in elementary school, I have loved to sing.

The original sentences are fragmented and incomplete, causing sentence structure errors. Combining related ideas into complete sentences improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Since I was in the elementary school I loved to sing in.

✓ Since I was in elementary school, I loved to sing.

The definite article 'the' is unnecessary before 'elementary school' when referring to general education level. Removing 'the' is correct.

× Yes, I have couple of experience that learns thing.

✓ Yes, I have a couple of experiences learning things.

The phrase 'couple of' requires an article 'a' before it, and 'experience' should be plural 'experiences' when countable. Also, 'learns thing' is incorrect; 'learning things' is appropriate.

× Once was the. In the middle school. I just choose my after school program. Singing program.

✓ Once, in middle school, I chose my after-school program, which was a singing program.

The original sentences are fragmented and lack proper connectors. Combining them into a complete sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I just choose my after school program.

✓ I just chose my after-school program.

The past tense of 'choose' is 'chose'. Since the action happened in the past, the past tense should be used.

× I loved to sing in.

✓ I loved to sing.

The preposition 'in' is unnecessary and incorrect at the end of the sentence.

× I'm I don't have confidence on singing in the.

✓ I don't have confidence in singing.

The phrase 'I'm I' is incorrect and redundant. Also, the correct preposition is 'in' for 'confidence in something'. The sentence is incomplete and should be corrected accordingly.

× I don't have confidence on singing in the.

✓ I don't have confidence in singing.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect here; 'confidence in' is the correct collocation.

× I think I don't want to sing for someone because. Singing is just my. Hobby and for relaxing my mind so.

✓ I think I don't want to sing for anyone because singing is just my hobby and helps me relax my mind.

'Someone' is less appropriate than 'anyone' in negative sentences. Also, the sentence fragments need to be combined for clarity.

× I saw some programs calls must qualification in that program days the members singing together and they became become a they're happy then before happier than before.

✓ I saw some programs called 'Must Qualification'. In those programs, the members sang together and became happier than before.

The verbs 'calls' and 'became become' are incorrect. 'Calls' should be past tense 'called' to match 'I saw'. 'Became become' is redundant; only 'became' is needed. Also, sentence structure is improved for clarity.