Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议加强句子结构的完整性和逻辑性，避免重复和断断续续的表达。可以尝试用简单明了的句子表达喜欢唱歌的原因，并说明唱歌如何帮助放松。

예시: Yes, I like singing very much because it helps me relax. I work hard every day, so singing gives me some personal time to unwind and feel happy.

제안: 回答不连贯，句子不完整，建议练习用完整句子表达自己的意思，并且用连接词使回答更流畅。可以说明自己是自学唱歌，目的只是为了放松，而不是专业学习。

예시: No, I have never taken singing lessons. I just sing on my own for fun. My goal is to relax, not to become a professional singer.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和不完整的句子，建议使用完整句子表达，并且用连接词使内容连贯。可以具体说明家人和朋友的支持如何激励自己。

예시: I would like to sing for my family and close friends because they always support me. Their appreciation motivates me to perform better.

제안: 回答表达不清晰，存在语法和词汇错误，建议用简单明了的句子表达观点，并具体说明唱歌如何带来快乐。

예시: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people. For me, it is a good way to relax and feel joyful.

× Yes, I like seeing pretty much because it can.

✓ Yes, I like singing pretty much because it can.

这里的动词应该用动名词形式，'like'后面接动名词表示喜欢做某事，'seeing'应改为'singing'。

× Make it can make me relaxed.

✓ It can make me relaxed.

句子结构不完整，'Make it can make me relaxed'语序错误，应调整为'It can make me relaxed'，使句子完整通顺。

× Oh. In my person who are working all the time, so I need some individual time to relax.

✓ Oh. I am a person who is working all the time, so I need some individual time to relax.

句子缺少主语和谓语，'In my person'不合适，应改为'I am a person'，并且主谓一致，'who are'改为'who is'。

× No, I just seen.

✓ No, I just saw.

'seen'是过去分词，不能单独用作过去式，应该用动词的过去式'saw'。

× On my own.

✓ I sing on my own.

句子缺少主语和谓语，补充完整句子使其表达清楚。

× Maybe it's not that standard, but I'm.

✓ Maybe it's not that standard, but I'm okay with it.

句子不完整，'but I'm'后面缺少内容，补充完整表达。

× What I want is.

✓ What I want is to relax.

句子不完整，缺少谓语部分，补充完整表达。

× To relax. Not to be. More professional.

✓ To relax, not to be more professional.

句子断裂，应合并为完整句子，表达清晰。

× because they're always supportive in the.

✓ because they're always supportive of me.

介词使用错误，'supportive'后应接介词'of'，并且补充宾语。

× Appreciate for what I'm doing, which motivates me to perform better.

✓ They appreciate what I'm doing, which motivates me to perform better.

缺少主语，'Appreciate'应改为完整句子，补充主语。

× Moreover, he removed.

✓ Moreover, they encourage me.

句子不完整且含义不明，推测原意为“他们鼓励我”，进行合理修改。

× For me it is quite ticket method.

✓ For me, it is quite a good method.

'ticket method'无意义，推测为表达“很好的方法”，进行合理修改。

× To relax and bring that happiness.

✓ To relax and bring happiness.

句子不完整，去掉多余的'that'使表达更自然。

× Which can. Touch my server. And. Few.

✓ Which can touch my soul and feelings.

原句断裂且无意义，推测表达“触动我的心灵和感情”，进行合理修改。