Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Hãy chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để tránh lỗi sai, đồng thời tránh lặp từ và diễn đạt không tự nhiên. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó giải thích lý do một cách cụ thể và logic.

예시: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and relieve stress after a long day. Singing makes me feel happier and improves my mood.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc, nhiều câu không có nghĩa hoặc không liên quan. Bạn nên tập trung trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và có liên kết logic giữa các ý.

예시: Yes, I started learning how to sing when I was 10 years old. It was a memorable experience because I enjoyed practicing different songs and improving my voice.

제안: Bạn đã trả lời khá tốt nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc và tránh lỗi sai chính tả.

예시: I want to sing for my friends because seeing them enjoy the music makes me happy. Singing together helps us feel closer and strengthens our friendship, which is very meaningful to me.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy sử dụng câu chủ đề và giải thích lý do một cách cụ thể, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu văn mạch lạc.

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it allows people to express their emotions and relieve stress. After singing, people often feel better and more joyful.

× Of course yes, I really like singing because when I'm singing I will enjoy myself and making me relief after a strap day.

✓ Of course yes, I really like singing because when I'm singing I enjoy myself and it makes me feel relieved after a stressful day.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'making me relief' which should be 'makes me feel relieved'. 'Making' should be changed to 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'it' (referring to singing). Also, 'relief' is a noun, but here the adjective 'relieved' is needed to describe the feeling. 'Strap day' is likely a typo for 'stressful day'.

× So singing make my life for you better an release my straight out.

✓ So singing makes my life better and releases my stress.

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'singing'. 'Release' should be 'releases' for the same reason. 'My life for you better' is incorrect and should be 'my life better'. 'Straight out' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'stress out' or 'stress'.

× Just to do I remember when I was 10 years old.

✓ I just remember when I was 10 years old.

The phrase 'Just to do I remember' is incorrect. The correct form is 'I just remember' to express recalling a past event. 'Just' should be placed before the verb 'remember'.

× I will learn how to sing and rap nightcore pasta.

✓ I learned how to sing and rap nightcore songs.

The sentence is about a past event, so 'will learn' is incorrect; it should be past tense 'learned'. 'Nightcore pasta' is likely a mishearing or typo; 'nightcore songs' is more appropriate.

× I will teach.

✓ I was taught.

The sentence 'I will teach' does not fit the context of learning singing in the past. The correct form is 'I was taught' to indicate receiving instruction.

× I would just buy my T-shirt.

✓ I would just buy my T-shirt.

This sentence is unclear and seems out of context. However, since it does not contain a clear grammar mistake from the list, no correction is made.

× How to sing France and is.

✓ How to sing French songs.

The phrase is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo. Corrected to 'How to sing French songs' to make sense.

× I really want to sing for my friend because when I sing us can see how much they enjoy the music.

✓ I really want to sing for my friends because when I sing, they can see how much they enjoy the music.

'Friend' should be plural 'friends' to match 'they'. 'Us can see' is incorrect; it should be 'they can see'.

× Singing together quiz grades special bond that is very meaningful to me.

✓ Singing together creates a special bond that is very meaningful to me.

'Quiz grades' is incorrect; likely a mishearing of 'creates'. The sentence structure is corrected accordingly.

× Of course yes singing is.

✓ Of course, yes, singing is.

The sentence is incomplete and awkward. Adding commas improves clarity.

× How is that the way people released their threat out of their mouth?

✓ It is a way people release their stress out of their mouth.

The sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Threat' should be 'stress'. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× An after singing they will be they will feel better and then enjoy their life.

✓ And after singing, they will feel better and then enjoy their life.

The sentence has repetition 'they will be they will feel'. Corrected to remove redundancy.