Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a direct response with a clear topic sentence, followed by specific reasons. Avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

예시: Yes, I enjoy singing because it has been my hobby since I was a child. In my country, singing is very popular, and I like both singing and listening to music.

제안: Your answer is confusing and lacks clarity. Provide a direct answer first, then add supporting details using linking words. Use correct grammar and vocabulary to express your ideas clearly.

예시: No, I have never formally learned how to sing. However, I often listen to traditional music, which inspires me to practice singing occasionally.

제안: Your answer is repetitive and unclear. Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain your reason with specific details and linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: I want to sing for my mother because she works very hard. When I sing in front of her, I think it makes her very happy.

제안: Your answer is difficult to understand and lacks coherence. Give a clear opinion first, then support it with reasons using linking words. Use appropriate vocabulary to express your ideas.

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it is relaxing and enjoyable. Many people listen to music every day to relieve stress and feel better.

× Because it is a hobby when I was child.

✓ Because it was a hobby when I was a child.

The sentence refers to a past time ('when I was a child'), so the verb 'is' should be in the past tense 'was'. Also, the article 'a' is missing before 'child'.

× No singing is most popular.

✓ Singing is very popular.

The phrase 'No singing is most popular' is incorrect. 'No' is unnecessary and 'most popular' should be preceded by 'very' to express popularity. Also, 'singing' is uncountable here, so no plural form is needed.

× I'll be in my country.

✓ I will be in my country.

The contraction 'I'll' is acceptable but expanding it to 'I will' is clearer. The sentence is correct in tense but could be clearer in context.

× I like singing and listening music.

✓ I like singing and listening to music.

The verb 'listening' requires the preposition 'to' before its object. Omitting 'to' is a common error.

× Have you ever learnt how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

'Learnt' is acceptable in British English, but 'learned' is more common in Canadian English. Both are past participles used with 'have' in present perfect tense.

× Actually, no, I'm not ever, not ever land. Dot.

✓ Actually, no, I have never learned. Period.

The original sentence is unclear and contains incorrect pronoun and word usage. 'I'm not ever' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I have never'. 'Land' and 'Dot' seem to be errors or misheard words; 'learned' and 'period' fit the context better.

× I'm listening a music, traditional music.

✓ I listen to music, traditional music.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' before its object. Also, 'listening' should be changed to 'listen' to fit the present simple tense for habitual action.

× So that's why I'm doing a practice sometime.

✓ So that's why I practice sometimes.

'Doing a practice' is unnatural; 'practice' as a verb is better. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency.

× Singing a song for front of my mother.

✓ Singing a song in front of my mother.

The correct preposition is 'in front of' to indicate position relative to someone.

× So then I'm thinking about she's very happy.

✓ So then I think that she is very happy.

The phrase 'I'm thinking about she's' is incorrect. It should be 'I think that she is' to express the thought clearly.

× Not, of course, thinking is.

✓ No, of course, I don't think so.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. The corrected sentence uses proper negation and structure to express disagreement.

× Giving me happiness for people.

✓ It gives me happiness and brings happiness to people.

The original sentence lacks a subject and proper verb form. The correction clarifies the meaning with appropriate pronouns and verbs.

× Call it is relaxing and enjoying the music.

✓ I call it relaxing and enjoyable music.

The phrase 'Call it is' is incorrect. The subject 'I' is needed, and 'enjoying' should be changed to 'enjoyable' to function as an adjective describing music.

× Some peoples are listening every day.

✓ Some people listen every day.

'People' is already plural; 'peoples' refers to ethnic groups and is incorrect here. Also, 'are listening' should be 'listen' for habitual action.

× Then they are tired.

✓ Then they get tired.

The present simple 'get tired' is more appropriate to describe a habitual or general result rather than the present continuous 'are tired'.