Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答有些断断续续，句子不完整，影响了表达的流畅性。建议你用完整的句子回答问题，并且避免重复和语法错误。例如，可以先直接回答喜欢唱歌，然后说明原因，最后补充具体的活动。

예시: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and relieve stress. I often go to karaoke with my friends, which is always a joyful experience.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，且内容不够连贯。建议使用正确的时态和词汇，清晰表达自己的意思，并且避免无关内容。

예시: No, I have never taken singing lessons. I usually just listen to music for enjoyment. Honestly, I'm not confident in my singing skills, but I am good at playing the drums.

제안: 回答中有很多语法和表达错误，内容不清晰。建议简洁明了地表达想为谁唱歌，并说明原因，避免使用不相关或错误的词汇。

예시: I want to sing for my family because they have always supported me. Singing is a way to show my love and appreciation for them.

제안: 回答中有语法错误，且表达不够完整。建议用完整的句子表达观点，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: Absolutely. I think singing can help people express their emotions and relieve stress, which brings happiness.

× Why yes, I like singing. Because. It makes me feel better and. Relieve my stress.

✓ Yes, I like singing because it makes me feel better and relieves my stress.

原句中“Because.”单独成句，句子结构不完整，且“Relieve my stress”缺少主语，应该用第三人称单数形式“relieves”。建议将句子合并，形成完整句子。

× And I always go to cover OK with my friends.

✓ And I always go to karaoke with my friends.

原句中“cover OK”应为“karaoke”，是拼写错误，且“go to karaoke”是正确的表达方式。

× No, I never have.

✓ No, I have never learned.

原句“never have”结构不完整，缺少动词，应该用现在完成时“have never learned”表示从未学过。

× I always listening to music in standoff.

✓ I am always listening to music on standby.

原句中“always listening”缺少助动词，应为“am always listening”；“in standoff”应为“on standby”，表示待机状态。

× Honestly, I'm not confident about my thingy.

✓ Honestly, I'm not confident about my singing.

“thingy”是口语中不正式的代词，应该用具体名词“singing”来表达意思。

× But I am good at pleaser drums.

✓ But I am good at playing drums.

“pleaser drums”拼写错误，应为“playing drums”，表示擅长打鼓。

× I want to sing for my family because they have always supported me and Sydney is our traditional activities and IT express.

✓ I want to sing for my family because they have always supported me, and singing is our traditional activity and it expresses my love to them.

原句中“Sydney”应为“singing”，且“activities”应为单数“activity”，同时“IT express”应为“it expresses”，代词使用错误。

× Absolutely. I think saying he can express our emotion and relieved, relieved my stress.

✓ Absolutely. I think singing can express our emotions and relieve my stress.

“saying he”应为“singing”，且“relieved”应为动词原形“relieve”，与“can”连用，表达能力。