Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中有语法错误，且用词不准确，导致表达不清晰。建议注意动词形式和词汇选择，避免拼写错误。可以用更自然的表达方式来说明你喜欢唱歌的原因。

예시: Yes, I like singing because the rhythm always makes me feel energetic and happy.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，句子结构不完整，表达不清晰。建议学习正确的时态和句子连接方式，避免断句错误。可以简洁明了地表达你曾考虑学习唱歌但放弃的原因。

예시: No, I have never learned how to sing professionally because I thought it would take too much of my time.

제안: 回答中存在语法和用词错误，句子不连贯。建议注意句子完整性和词汇准确性，避免断句。可以更具体地描述你想为母亲唱歌的原因。

예시: I want to sing for my mother because she is the most important person in my life, and I want to show her my love and appreciation.

제안: 回答中语法和句子结构不完整，表达不清晰。建议注意句子完整性和词汇使用，避免断句和拼写错误。可以更具体地说明唱歌如何带来快乐。

예시: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness because the lyrics can encourage people who feel hopeless and boost their confidence.

× I like seeing because the rhythm always make me activity.

✓ I like singing because the rhythm always makes me active.

这里'seeing'应为'singing'，因为题目问的是喜欢唱歌。'make'应为'makes'，因为主语是单数'rhythm'，需要第三人称单数形式。'activity'是名词，应该用形容词'active'来描述人的状态。

× No, I was thought about learning professionals in skills but.

✓ No, I thought about learning professional skills but.

'was thought'是被动语态，意思是“被认为”，这里应使用主动语态的过去式'thought'。'professionals in skills'表达不正确，应改为'professional skills'表示专业技能。

× I gave up because it waste a lot of my time.

✓ I gave up because it wastes a lot of my time.

主句是过去时，原因状语从句用一般现在时表示普遍真理，'waste'应改为第三人称单数'wastes'，因为主语是单数的'it'。

× I want to sing for my mother because.

✓ I want to sing for my mother because she is the most grateful person to me and I think she is the most beautiful and active person in the world.

句子中'because'后面没有完整的从句，导致句子结构不完整。需要补充完整的原因从句。

× She's most grateful person for me and I think she is the most beautiful and activity. People in the world.

✓ She's the most grateful person to me and I think she is the most beautiful and active person in the world.

'most grateful'前缺少定冠词'the'。'for me'应改为'to me'表示对某人而言。'activity'是名词，应该用形容词'active'。'People'应为单数'person'。

× Yes, because I think Lyric could encourage the hopeless people and bring. Happiness and confidence to the.

✓ Yes, because I think lyrics could encourage hopeless people and bring happiness and confidence to them.

'Lyric'应为复数'lyrics'表示歌词。句中断句错误，'bring.'后不应断句。'the hopeless people'中'the'可去掉。'to the'后缺少宾语，应补充'them'。