Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer shows enthusiasm but has grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to keep your sentences clear and concise, avoid redundancy, and use correct grammar. For example, say "I enjoy singing because it makes me feel happy and cheerful. Whenever I feel afraid or stressed, singing helps me relax and lift my mood. I especially like singing earth songs because they are catchy and easy to sing along."

예시: I enjoy singing because it makes me feel happy and cheerful. Whenever I feel stressed, singing helps me relax and lift my mood. I especially like singing earth songs because they are catchy and easy to sing along.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical mistakes. Focus on structuring your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use correct verb tenses and vocabulary. For example, say "Yes, I learnt how to sing when I was in high school. I took part in a choir where I received basic vocal training and learned about pitch and rhythm. Singing has always interested me because it helps me express emotions and improve my confidence."

예시: Yes, I learnt how to sing when I was in high school. I took part in a choir where I received basic vocal training and learned about pitch and rhythm. Singing has always interested me because it helps me express emotions and improve my confidence.

제안: Your answer is confusing and lacks coherence. Try to organise your ideas logically and use linking words to connect your points. Also, avoid unnecessary repetition. For example, say "I would like to sing for my family and close friends because singing for them is more personal and meaningful. They know me well and appreciate my efforts. Singing for them motivates me to improve and enjoy the experience."

예시: I would like to sing for my family and close friends because singing for them is more personal and meaningful. They know me well and appreciate my efforts. Singing for them motivates me to improve and enjoy the experience.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Make sure to provide a clear opinion and support it with reasons or examples. For example, say "Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it allows them to express their feelings and connect with others. Singing can also relieve stress and create joyful moments."

예시: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it allows them to express their feelings and connect with others. Singing can also relieve stress and create joyful moments.

× Yes, I do enjoy singing because it's always makes me feel happy and cheerful

✓ Yes, I do enjoy singing because it always makes me feel happy and cheerful

The verb 'makes' should be used with the singular subject 'it'. The auxiliary 'does' is not needed here because 'it' is the subject. The phrase 'it's always makes' is incorrect; it should be 'it always makes'.

× Whenever I feel afraid or histories singings helps me relax and a lift my mood.

✓ Whenever I feel afraid, singing helps me relax and lift my mood.

The sentence has incorrect conjunction and word usage. 'Histories singings' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'singing'. Also, 'a lift' is incorrect; it should be 'lift'. The conjunction 'or' is not appropriate here; a comma is better to separate the clauses.

× I specially like singing earth song as they are catchy and easy to sing along.

✓ I especially like singing Earth songs as they are catchy and easy to sing along to.

The word 'specially' is incorrect; it should be 'especially' to mean 'particularly'. 'Earth song' should be plural 'Earth songs' if referring to multiple songs. Also, 'sing along' needs the preposition 'to' at the end.

× Yes Sir, I have learn how to sing when I was a was in high school, I took part in a chair while I with basic vocal training and learn about placed an Arvind.

✓ Yes Sir, I learned how to sing when I was in high school. I took part in a choir while I received basic vocal training and learned about pitch and rhythm.

The verb 'learn' should be in past tense 'learned' to match the past time reference. 'Was a was' is incorrect and should be 'was'. 'Chair' is likely a typo for 'choir'. 'With basic vocal training' should be rephrased to 'received basic vocal training'. 'Learn about placed an Arvind' is unclear and likely meant 'learned about pitch and rhythm'.

× Singing has always interested me because it helps me express emotion and improvement confident.

✓ Singing has always interested me because it helps me express emotion and improve confidence.

The phrase 'improvement confident' is incorrect. It should be 'improve confidence' to correctly use the verb form and noun.

× I would like to sing for my family and close friends singing programs is more personal and and meaningful because they know me well and.

✓ I would like to sing for my family and close friends. Singing programs are more personal and meaningful because they know me well.

The original sentence is a run-on and lacks proper punctuation. 'Singing programs is' should be 'Singing programs are' to agree in number. The repeated 'and' is an error. The sentence should be split for clarity.

× Appreciate my efforts near over there suffered and encode encoders men motive need to improve and enjoy the experience.

✓ They appreciate my efforts, and I am motivated to improve and enjoy the experience.

The original sentence is unclear and contains many errors and nonsensical phrases. It has been restructured to convey a clear meaning related to appreciation and motivation.

× Yes, in my opinion, singing, singing can bring happiness to people because whenever people make up said that I'm that I'm the the singing. That's why.

✓ Yes, in my opinion, singing can bring happiness to people because it helps them express their feelings. That's why.

The original sentence is repetitive and unclear. It has been corrected to a clear and grammatically correct statement expressing the opinion.