Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng ngữ pháp và tránh lỗi sai về thì và từ vựng. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó giải thích lý do một cách mạch lạc và tự nhiên hơn.

예시: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it allows me to express my emotions and relax my mind.

제안: Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu phủ định đúng và tránh thêm từ không cần thiết. Câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tự nhiên.

예시: No, I have never tried to learn how to sing.

제안: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp, đặc biệt là chia động từ và sử dụng đại từ đúng. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên mạch lạc, tránh câu bị ngắt quãng và dùng từ phù hợp hơn.

예시: I would like to sing for my family and close friends because they are very supportive and appreciate my efforts, which motivates me to perform better.

제안: Bạn nên nói rõ ràng, tránh lỗi phát âm và ngữ pháp. Câu trả lời cần có cấu trúc rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và nói lan man. Hãy sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và liên kết ý tốt hơn.

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it helps them relax and enjoy themselves.

× Yes, I am very enjoyed singing.

✓ Yes, I enjoy singing very much.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'am enjoyed' which is not a correct present tense form. 'Enjoy' is a stative verb and should be used in simple present tense as 'I enjoy'. Also, 'very' should modify 'much' to express degree properly.

× Because when I say things I feel my emotions at put in.

✓ Because when I say things, I feel my emotions are put in.

The original sentence lacks proper structure and clarity. Adding 'are' before 'put in' corrects the passive voice and clarifies the meaning. Also, a comma after 'things' improves readability.

× Let my head out.

✓ It lets my head clear.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Replacing it with 'It lets my head clear' conveys the intended meaning of feeling relaxed or refreshed.

× No, I never tried to learn to sing it.

✓ No, I have never tried to learn to sing.

The sentence incorrectly uses simple past 'tried' without auxiliary 'have' for an experience up to now. Also, 'to sing it' is incorrect; 'to sing' suffices.

× Singing for them feel special because.

✓ Singing for them feels special because

The verb 'feel' should be in third person singular form 'feels' to agree with the singular subject 'Singing'. The sentence is incomplete and should be connected to the following explanation.

× These are supportive and appreciates my first which motivates me to perform betters.

✓ They are supportive and appreciate me, which motivates me to perform better.

'These' should be replaced with 'They' as the subject. 'Appreciates' should be 'appreciate' to agree with plural subject. 'My first' is unclear and replaced with 'me'. 'Betters' is incorrect; 'better' is the correct comparative form.

× Yes, of course, as I was saying, and when we are seeing and will we will become more relaxed, Ann.

✓ Yes, of course, as I was saying, when we sing, we become more relaxed.

The original sentence is confusing and contains unclear phrases like 'when we are seeing and will we will'. Replacing with 'when we sing, we become more relaxed' clarifies the meaning.

× Yes, I think it's saying can bring happiness too. Other people.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to other people too.

'It's saying' is incorrect; it should be 'singing'. The sentence is fragmented; combining into one sentence improves clarity.