Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够自然流畅，表达含糊且有语法错误。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复和不必要的停顿。

예시: I don't consider myself talented at singing, but I enjoy singing when I'm alone because it helps me relax.

제안: 回答结构混乱，语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议直接回答问题，并用连贯的句子补充细节。

예시: I took some singing lessons during junior high school, but I didn't learn much. However, I sometimes watch singing videos online to practice.

제안: 表达不够连贯，语法和词汇使用不准确。建议用清晰的句子表达自己的想法，并使用连接词使回答更流畅。

예시: I usually don't sing for others because I'm shy and not confident. But if I had to choose, I would sing for my mother because she is very supportive.

제안: 回答较为自然，但有语法错误和重复。建议注意句子结构和词汇准确性，避免重复。

예시: Absolutely, singing is a great way to express emotions and relax. For example, I feel very relaxed when I sing alone at home.

× Well, I think it is a difficult question for me because, you know, I'm not talented in this. And but I think it is a nice stuff to read next.

✓ Well, I think it is a difficult question for me because, you know, I'm not talented in this. But I think it is a nice thing to do next.

句中使用了“and but”两个连词，造成重复且不符合英语习惯，应只用一个连词“but”。另外，“stuff”用法不当，应该用“thing”来表达“事情”或“活动”。

× And but I think it is a nice stuff to read next.

✓ But I think it is a nice thing to do next.

“stuff”是不可数名词，不能用“a”修饰，且语境中应使用“thing”表示“事情”或“活动”。

× Maybe I I was saying when there's no other people.

✓ Maybe I sing when there are no other people.

原句结构混乱，缺少谓语动词，且“was saying”用法不当，应使用一般现在时“sing”表达习惯动作；“other people”前应有复数形式的“are”。

× Well, what I'm in Senior High School or junior high school.

✓ Well, when I was in Senior High School or Junior High School.

此处应使用过去时态“was”，表示过去的时间状态；“what”用法错误，应改为“when”。

× I artanis an English class in our school, but I don't think I learned too much about saying.

✓ I attended an English class in our school, but I don't think I learned too much about singing.

“artanis”拼写错误，应为“attended”；“about saying”应为“about singing”，动名词形式正确。

× Although I sometimes watching videos and may make the person in the videos.

✓ Although I sometimes watch videos and may imitate the person in the videos.

“sometimes watching”应为“sometimes watch”，动词需用原形；“may make the person”表达不清，应改为“may imitate the person”，表示模仿。

× No, no one, because I have seen that I'm not talented. Insane.

✓ No, no one, because I have seen that I'm not talented in singing.

“Insane”拼写错误，应为“in singing”，表示“在唱歌方面”；缺少介词“in”。

× So I mean be shy to sing to other people, but if you must pick one, I think it may be my mother because I think she won't laugh and meet.

✓ So I mean I am shy to sing to other people, but if I must pick one, I think it may be my mother because I think she won't laugh at me.

缺少“am”作为系动词；“if you must pick one”应为“if I must pick one”；“laugh and meet”错误，应为“laugh at me”，表示“嘲笑我”。

× I think she won't laugh and meet.

✓ I think she won't laugh at me.

“laugh”后应接介词“at”表示“嘲笑某人”，原句“and meet”无意义。

× Oh absolutely, I think it is a good way to express your emotions or relaxing yourself.

✓ Oh absolutely, I think it is a good way to express your emotions or relax yourself.

“or relaxing yourself”应与前面动词形式一致，改为“or relax yourself”，保持动词原形。

× And for example every time I sing and Home alone.

✓ For example, every time I sing at home alone.

“and Home alone”表达不清，应为“at home alone”，表示“独自在家”；“for example”后应加逗号。

× I will fill. Relaxed, relaxed.

✓ I will feel relaxed.

“fill”拼写错误，应为“feel”；“relaxed”重复且用法错误，应为形容词作表语，前面加动词“feel”。