Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và tự nhiên. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và diễn đạt mạch lạc hơn. Hãy sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và bổ sung thêm chi tiết cụ thể để làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn.

예시: Yes, I like singing very much because it allows me to express my emotions and I have always dreamed of becoming a singer in the future.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến người nghe khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lỗi và bổ sung lý do hoặc trải nghiệm cụ thể để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

예시: No, I haven't learned how to sing formally, but I often practice singing at home because it motivates me to improve.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng nhưng cách diễn đạt chưa rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lặp từ và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể để câu trả lời tự nhiên và mạch lạc hơn.

예시: I want to sing for my mom and my friends because they feel happy when I sing, and I enjoy sharing beautiful songs with them.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cách diễn đạt chưa rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, liên kết ý bằng từ nối và bổ sung ví dụ cụ thể để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

예시: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because songs often have special meanings and tell stories that inspire listeners. Whether the song is happy or sad, it can touch people's hearts.

× I really like singing because when it was a trial, I have a dream of becoming a singer in the future.

✓ I really like singing because when I was a child, I had a dream of becoming a singer in the future.

The sentence mixes past and present tenses incorrectly. 'When it was a trial' is unclear and likely meant to refer to a past time, so 'when I was a child' is more appropriate. Also, 'I have a dream' should be in past tense 'I had a dream' to match the past time reference.

× I haven't learned how to sing. I trust sings. A chest at home an because it have me to have a motivated to sturdy Ann I haven't learned how to sing before.

✓ I haven't learned how to sing. I practice singing at home because it motivates me to study. I haven't learned how to sing before.

The original sentence contains many unclear and incorrect phrases. 'I trust sings' is incorrect; it should be 'I practice singing'. 'A chest at home an because it have me to have a motivated to sturdy Ann' is grammatically incorrect and unclear; corrected to 'I practice singing at home because it motivates me to study'. The verb forms and sentence structure needed correction to convey the intended meaning.

× I want to sing for my mom and my friends just because they are please when I singing an I had be because of this and I want to sing for them about. Some songs that are. Beautiful.

✓ I want to sing for my mom and my friends because they are pleased when I sing, and I feel happy because of this. I want to sing beautiful songs for them.

The sentence has incorrect pronoun and verb forms: 'they are please' should be 'they are pleased'; 'when I singing' should be 'when I sing'; 'I had be because of this' is unclear and corrected to 'I feel happy because of this'. Also, sentence fragments like 'I want to sing for them about. Some songs that are. Beautiful.' are combined into a coherent sentence.

× Yes, I sing. Singing can bring happiness to people because in the songster have a a special meaning and its tail the story that can inspire 2 people. It may be a happy song, is maybe a sad song, but.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because songs have special meanings and tell stories that can inspire people. It may be a happy song or maybe a sad song, but it still brings emotions.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and has unclear phrases: 'in the songster have a a special meaning' corrected to 'songs have special meanings'; 'its tail the story' corrected to 'tell stories'; 'inspire 2 people' corrected to 'inspire people'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.