Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时语句不连贯，存在断句和语法错误，建议练习连贯表达，避免句子碎片化，同时回答内容应更具体。

예시: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and feel happy. For example, I often sing in the shower, which makes my mornings more enjoyable.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，建议加强语法练习，使用完整句子，并且内容要紧扣问题。

예시: No, I have never taken singing lessons, but I enjoy watching YouTube videos where professionals teach singing techniques and songwriting.

제안: 表达不清晰且语法错误严重，建议学习正确的句子结构，避免拼写错误，并且回答要简洁明了。

예시: I prefer to sing to myself because I am not confident in my singing skills. Singing alone helps me relax and reduces stress.

제안: 回答内容偏离问题，语法和表达不够准确，建议直接回答问题并用具体例子支持观点。

예시: Yes, I believe singing and music can bring happiness to people. For instance, I enjoy going to nightclubs where lively music creates a joyful atmosphere.

× I like singing because.

✓ I like singing because it makes me feel relaxed and happy.

句子不完整，because后面需要有完整的从句，不能单独成句。建议将两个句子合并，形成完整的因果关系。

× And I always. Sing when I am taking a shower.

✓ I always sing when I am taking a shower.

句子中断，And不应单独成句，且动词与主语应连贯。建议去掉And并将句子连贯起来。

× Because I think it is right.

✓ I think it is right.

句子以because开头但没有主句，导致句子不完整。建议去掉because，使句子完整。

× No, I've never. Learned how to sing before but.

✓ No, I've never learned how to sing before, but

learned前不应有句号，且but后应接续句子。建议去掉句号并用逗号连接。

× I like to watch the video on YouTube that professional told people how to sing in.

✓ I like to watch videos on YouTube where professionals teach people how to sing.

介词使用错误，应该用where引导定语从句，且video应为复数videos，professional应为复数professionals。

× How to write this songs?

✓ How to write these songs?

句子结构不完整，且this与复数songs搭配不当，应使用these。

× my things skills is very. Worst.

✓ my singing skills are very bad.

things skills错误，应为singing skills，skills为复数，谓语动词应为are，worst用法不当，应改为bad。

× So if I think to others, I will feel very embarrassed and saying to myself.

✓ So if I sing to others, I will feel very embarrassed, but singing to myself

句子结构混乱，think to others不合适，应为sing to others，and后面应为完整句子。

× Can also makes me feel relaxed an stress.

✓ can also make me feel relaxed and less stressed.

主语缺失，can后应接动词原形make，an应为and，stress应为形容词形式stressed。

× Nightclub have very, very much. Heavy music, so.

✓ Nightclubs have a lot of heavy music, so

nightclub应为复数nightclubs，谓语动词应为have，very, very much用法不当，改为a lot of。