Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more natural and concise by avoiding filler words like 'uh' and improving sentence structure. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: No, I don't like singing because my voice isn't suitable for it. Instead, I prefer listening to music as it relaxes me.

제안: Improve sentence clarity and grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid redundancy. Also, be specific about how music helps you.

예시: No, I have never learned to sing because I haven't attended any singing classes. Instead, I enjoy listening to music, which helps me relieve stress and feel happier.

제안: Avoid filler words like 'uh' and try to make your sentences more concise and natural. Use linking words to connect your ideas clearly.

예시: Although I'm not a good singer, I would sing for my husband to express my feelings and love through music.

제안: Work on sentence structure and grammar to make your answer clearer. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and provide specific reasons.

예시: I believe singing brings happiness to people who have learned it or are professional singers because it helps them relieve stress and feel healed.

× Rather, I prefer listening music than singing.

✓ Rather, I prefer listening to music than singing.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' when followed by an object. Hence, 'listening music' is incorrect; it should be 'listening to music'. This is a common prepositional error.

× No, I don't even know how to sing because I didn't attend it Any learning classes for singing.

✓ No, I don't even know how to sing because I didn't attend any learning classes for singing.

The phrase 'didn't attend it Any learning classes' is incorrect. The word 'it' is unnecessary and 'Any' should not be capitalized. The sentence requires past tense consistency and proper article usage.

× Rather than singing, I usually enjoy music listening music which helped me to relieve my stress and make me happier.

✓ Rather than singing, I usually enjoy listening to music which helps me to relieve my stress and makes me happier.

The phrase 'music listening music' is incorrect and redundant. The correct phrase is 'listening to music'. Also, the verbs should be in present tense to match the habitual action.

× I think the people who have learned singing or who is a professional singer, for them of course singing will bring them happiness ads.

✓ I think the people who have learned singing or who are professional singers, for them of course singing will bring them happiness as.

The subject 'people' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'. Also, 'ads' seems to be a typo and should be 'as'. Subject-verb agreement is essential for grammatical correctness.

× It's a healing mechanism for them to relieve from their stress and if as they are professional it make.

✓ It's a healing mechanism for them to relieve their stress, and since they are professional, it makes them happy.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks clarity. The phrase 'relieve from their stress' should be 'relieve their stress'. Also, 'if as they are professional it make' is ungrammatical and needs restructuring for clarity and correct verb agreement.