Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer needs to be clearer and more natural. Start with a direct response to the question, then explain why you like singing. Avoid grammatical errors and redundancy. For example, say "Yes, I really like singing, especially folk songs, because they make me feel comfortable and strong."

예시: Yes, I really enjoy singing, especially folk songs, because they make me feel relaxed and empowered. Singing helps me express my emotions and brings me joy.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Begin with a direct answer, then provide specific details about your singing experience. Use linking words to connect ideas. For example, "Yes, I started singing when I was three years old. Since then, I have practiced on my own and tried different styles."

예시: Yes, I began singing when I was three years old. Since then, I have practiced by myself and explored various singing styles to improve my skills.

제안: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by correcting grammar and expanding with more details. Start with a clear topic sentence and add reasons. For example, "I want to sing for my mom because she has always supported me and means a lot to me."

예시: I want to sing for my mom because she has always supported me and played an important role in my life. Singing for her would be a way to show my appreciation.

제안: Your answer needs to be more coherent and grammatically correct. Provide a clear opinion and support it with specific examples using linking words. For example, "Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness. For instance, when I feel sad, listening to songs lifts my mood and makes me happy."

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. For example, when I feel sad, listening to my favorite songs helps me relax and improves my mood.

× Is I'm really like singing and specially folk songs because it is made me very comfortable and strength.

✓ I really like singing, especially folk songs because they make me feel very comfortable and strong.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'Is I'm' instead of 'I'. Also, 'it is made me' is incorrect; the subject should be plural 'songs' and the verb should be 'make' to agree with the plural subject. 'Strength' is a noun, but the intended meaning is an adjective 'strong'. The pronouns and verb forms need correction for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× And additionally I'm. Don't feel like with that. Singing.

✓ And additionally, I don't feel like that when singing.

The sentence has fragmented and incorrect pronoun usage. 'I'm. Don't feel like with that. Singing.' is ungrammatical. It should be combined properly with correct pronouns and verb forms to express the intended meaning clearly.

× Firstly, when it was three years old, I have been started singing and interestingly I.

✓ Firstly, when I was three years old, I started singing, and interestingly, I...

The phrase 'when it was three years old' incorrectly uses 'it' instead of 'I'. Also, 'I have been started' is incorrect; the correct past tense is 'I started'. The sentence needs proper subject and past tense verb usage.

× I'm started singing on my own experience.

✓ I started singing based on my own experience.

'I'm started' is incorrect; 'I'm' is a contraction of 'I am' and cannot be combined with 'started'. The sentence structure needs correction to use the simple past tense 'I started' and proper preposition 'based on'.

× Since then I singing different.

✓ Since then, I have been singing different songs.

The sentence lacks a proper verb form; 'I singing' is incorrect. It should be 'I have been singing' to indicate an action continuing from the past to present. Also, 'different' needs a noun to complete the meaning, such as 'songs'.

× Now I'm want to sing for my mom because she's playing a crucial role in my life.

✓ Now I want to sing for my mom because she plays a crucial role in my life.

'I'm want' is incorrect; 'I want' is the correct present tense form. Also, 'she's playing' suggests a continuous action, but 'she plays' is more appropriate for a general fact.

× That's why I. Sing for my mom.

✓ That's why I sing for my mom.

The sentence has an unnecessary period after 'I'. It should be 'I sing' to form a correct present tense sentence.

× Yes, I think it is. Give a hapiness anybody?

✓ Yes, I think it gives happiness to anybody.

The sentence fragments and incorrect pronoun usage make it unclear. 'It is. Give a hapiness anybody?' is ungrammatical. The correct form is 'it gives happiness to anybody' with proper subject-verb agreement and prepositions.

× For example, when I feel sad, I listen to or seeing songs too.

✓ For example, when I feel sad, I listen to or watch songs too.

'Listen to or seeing songs' mixes verb forms and uses incorrect prepositions. 'Listen to' is correct, but 'seeing' should be 'watch' or 'see'. The sentence needs parallel verb forms and correct prepositions.

× Call my mind and make me very very happy.

✓ They calm my mind and make me very, very happy.

The sentence lacks a subject; 'Call my mind' is incorrect. The intended meaning is that songs calm the mind. Also, 'very very' should be separated by a comma for clarity.