Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答は意味が伝わりにくく、文法的な誤りが多いです。より自然で効果的な表現を使い、理由を明確に述べることが重要です。例えば、ストレス解消やリラックス効果について具体的に説明しましょう。

예시: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and reduces my stress. Singing allows me to express my emotions freely, which makes me feel more open and happy.

제안: 回答が不明瞭で、意図が伝わりにくいです。過去の経験について明確に答え、将来の計画を具体的に述べることが必要です。例えば、歌のレッスンを受けたことがないが、将来高い声を出せるように練習したいと述べましょう。

예시: No, I haven't learned how to sing professionally. However, in the future, I would like to practice singing, especially to improve my ability to sing high notes.

제안: 回答が断片的で意味が取りづらいです。誰のために歌いたいのかを明確にし、その理由や状況を具体的に説明しましょう。例えば、遠くにいる恋人のために歌いたいと述べると良いです。

예시: I want to sing for my girlfriend who is currently in America. Singing for her is important to me because it helps me express my feelings despite the distance.

제안: 回答が抽象的で文法的にも不正確です。歌が人々に幸福をもたらす理由を具体的に述べ、論理的に説明しましょう。例えば、歌は感情を伝え、人々をつなげる力があると述べると良いです。

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it allows people to express their emotions and connect with others. Music has the power to uplift spirits and make the world a better place.

× Yes I do becauses.

✓ Yes, I do because.

The word 'becauses' is incorrect; the correct conjunction is 'because'. Also, a comma is needed after 'Yes' for proper sentence structure.

× I singing makes me by openness and.

✓ Singing makes me feel open and relaxed.

The verb 'singing' should be used as a gerund subject without 'I' before it. The phrase 'makes me by openness' is incorrect; it should be 'makes me feel open'. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity.

× I think thinking reduce my stress.

✓ I think singing reduces my stress.

The phrase 'thinking reduce' is incorrect; the verb should agree with the subject and be in the correct form. 'Singing reduces' is appropriate here.

× So it is very good and relaxing method.

✓ So it is a very good and relaxing method.

The sentence is missing the article 'a' before 'very good and relaxing method'.

× No, I haven't.

✓ No, I haven't.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× I haven't learned about the thing.

✓ I haven't learned how to sing.

The phrase 'about the thing' is vague and unclear. It should be replaced with a clearer expression related to the context.

× But in the future I tractor and thinking thing and to improve my singing skills I'd like to think with high.

✓ But in the future, I want to practice and think about improving my singing skills. I'd like to sing with a high voice.

The original sentence is unclear and contains incorrect words like 'tractor' and 'think with high'. It is restructured for clarity and correctness.

× I want to sing for my girlfriend and girlfriend is.

✓ I want to sing for my girlfriend, and she is

The repetition of 'girlfriend' is unnecessary; the pronoun 'she' should be used instead.

× In America now so I would like to tear her my.

✓ She is in America now, so I would like to tell her my feelings.

The sentence is fragmented and contains incorrect words like 'tear'. It is corrected for clarity and meaning.

× Mine too. Her and.

✓ I miss her too.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear; it is corrected to express the intended meaning.

× Sing is very important method.

✓ Singing is a very important method.

The noun 'sing' is incorrect; it should be the gerund 'singing'. Also, the article 'a' is needed before 'very important method'.

× Yes, I do, I guess singing at the magic.

✓ Yes, I do. I guess singing is magical.

The phrase 'singing at the magic' is incorrect; it should be 'singing is magical'. Also, the sentence is split for clarity.

× And to test something to people.

✓ And it can touch people's hearts.

The phrase 'to test something to people' is incorrect and unclear; it is replaced with a clearer expression.

× I think singing make the world better and it's very great.

✓ I think singing makes the world better, and it's great.

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'singing'. Also, 'very great' is unnatural; 'great' suffices.