Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中存在多处发音和用词错误，如将'singing'误说为'seeing'，影响了表达的清晰度。建议加强发音练习，确保关键词准确表达。同时，回答内容较为重复，缺少连贯的逻辑连接词，建议使用连接词如'because', 'although'来丰富句子结构，使表达更自然流畅。

예시: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and improves my mood. Although I'm not very good at it, I still enjoy singing in my free time.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，如时态和动词形式使用不当，且表达不够连贯。建议加强基本语法练习，特别是动词时态和句子结构。同时，避免重复和犹豫词汇，提升表达的流畅性。

예시: Actually, I haven't learned to sing in a traditional way, but I have searched for singing techniques online because I want to improve my singing skills.

제안: 回答中表达不清晰，语法和词汇使用错误较多，影响理解。建议简化句子结构，明确表达意图，避免使用不准确的词汇，如'many's thinking skills'。同时，注意句子连贯性和逻辑性。

예시: I usually sing for myself because I am still building my confidence. However, when I feel more confident, I would like to perform in front of others, which I think would be a great experience.

제안: 回答中存在词汇使用错误，如'harnessed to people'和'body language'用法不当，影响表达准确性。建议学习常用表达方式，使用更贴切的词汇描述感受。同时，注意句子结构和逻辑连接，使表达更自然。

예시: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people. For me, singing is a way to express my feelings and relax. It also helps me connect with others.

× Yes, I like seeing because I think it thing is a very important method to undertake my pleasure.

✓ Yes, I like singing because I think it is a very important method to enjoy my pleasure.

这里'seeing'应为'singing'，因为题目是关于唱歌。'seeing'是动词的现在分词形式，但语境中应使用'singing'。另外，'it thing'应改为'it'，去掉多余的' thing'。

× Well, I'm seeing, I feel relaxed and pleasant and my mood is very good.

✓ Well, when I'm singing, I feel relaxed and pleasant, and my mood is very good.

句子缺少连接词，'I'm seeing'应为'when I'm singing'以表达时间状语。

× Although I'm not seeing very good but I still seeing in my free time.

✓ Although I'm not very good at singing, I still sing in my free time.

'seeing'应为'singing'，且表达能力时应使用'sing'的动词原形或短语结构。

× Actually, I'm not learned how to sing in a very traditional way, but I'm, uh, I, I search some singing skills on the website because I'm not so good at saying and I want to sing very good.

✓ Actually, I haven't learned how to sing in a very traditional way, but I searched for some singing skills on the website because I'm not so good at singing and I want to sing very well.

'I'm not learned'应为' I haven't learned'，使用现在完成时。'search'应为过去式'searched'。'saying'应为'singing'。'very good'应为副词形式'very well'。

× I surely sing for myself because I don't have many's thinking skills yet and however I think but I'm ready when collect more confidence and thinking skills.

✓ I surely sing for myself because I don't have many singing skills yet; however, I think when I collect more confidence and singing skills, I'm ready.

'many's thinking skills'表达错误，应为'many singing skills'。句子结构混乱，需调整连接词和语序。

× I can perform from in front of other peoples and I think this will be a very good experience.

✓ I can perform in front of other people, and I think this will be a very good experience.

'from in front of'重复介词，应去掉'from'。'peoples'应为'people'，因为'people'已经是复数形式。

× Yes, I think it can be harnessed to people, at least for me.

✓ Yes, I think it can bring happiness to people, at least for me.

'harnessed to people'用词不当，应改为'bring happiness to people'更符合语境。

× Why I'm saying I feel this is my body language and it can relax to me very well and expressed my feelings very well why I'm seeing.

✓ When I'm singing, I feel this is my body language and it can relax me very well and express my feelings very well when I'm singing.

'Why I'm saying'应为'When I'm singing'。'relax to me'应为'relax me'。'expressed'应为' express'，保持时态一致。

× I think this is a connect and a bridge to others.

✓ I think this is a connection and a bridge to others.

'connect'应为名词'connection'，表示连接。