Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如时态使用不当和句子结构不完整。建议注意时态一致性，避免重复表达，并使用更自然流畅的句子。

예시: Yes, I love singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. When I sing, I feel that my feelings flow out through the lyrics, which are very powerful.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，且句子结构混乱。建议加强语法基础，使用正确的时态和句子结构，并且表达要简洁明了。

예시: No, I have never learned to sing professionally, but I often sing at home by myself. For example, when I am alone and feeling down, I enjoy doing karaoke to lift my mood.

제안: 回答内容感人且有情感，但句子较长且缺少适当的连接词，导致表达不够连贯。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，同时注意语法准确。

예시: I would like to sing for my grandmother, who has already passed away. She never heard me sing before, but when I was a child, I told her she would be my first fan if I became a singer. So, if I had the chance, I would sing for her.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整的问题，句子缺乏连贯性。建议注意句子完整性，使用恰当的连接词，并避免重复和语法错误。

예시: Definitely, music has strong emotional power. It can encourage people to do great things and always bring happiness. I think singing is a wonderful way to express our feelings.

× It is a great way for me to relax when I sang.

✓ It is a great way for me to relax when I sing.

这里描述的是一种习惯性动作或现在的事实，应该使用一般现在时，而不是过去时。

× I feel my emotions flows out with my songs and lyrics, especially lyrics, they are so powerful.

✓ I feel my emotions flow out with my songs and lyrics, especially lyrics, they are so powerful.

主语emotions是复数，谓语动词应该用复数形式flow，而不是flows。

× No, I have a learn how to sing systematically, but I do always saying at home by myself.

✓ No, I have not learned how to sing systematically, but I always sing at home by myself.

这里的have a learn用法错误，应该用have not learned表示否定完成时；do always saying结构不正确，应该用always sing表示习惯动作。

× For instance, when I in home along and when I feel deprived and along, I always do a home karaoke and singing or sound I really touched me.

✓ For instance, when I am home alone and when I feel deprived and lonely, I always do karaoke at home and sing songs that really touch me.

缺少动词am，home前应加介词at，along应为alone，deprived用法不当，改为lonely更合适；do a home karaoke表达不自然，改为do karaoke at home更准确。

× I would like to sing for my grandmother on the you know she's already gone and I want to sing it to her because she never heard my singing before and when I was a child I always told her she will be my first fan if I'd be a singer.

✓ I would like to sing for my grandmother, you know she's already gone, and I want to sing to her because she has never heard my singing before. When I was a child, I always told her she would be my first fan if I became a singer.

时态不一致，never heard应使用现在完成时has never heard；条件句中if从句应使用过去时became而不是现在时be。

× So if I had to sing, I want to sing for her.

✓ So if I had to sing, I would want to sing for her.

条件句中主句应使用would表示假设语气，want改为would want。

× Definitely, music has a strong emotion powers they.

✓ Definitely, music has strong emotional powers.

powers是复数，不需要冠词a；emotion应改为形容词emotional修饰powers；they多余且语法错误。

× They got encourage people to do very powerful things and we can always bring happiness to people.

✓ It can encourage people to do very powerful things and we can always bring happiness to people.

主语music是不可数名词，应该用it；got encourage用法错误，改为can encourage。

× And I think it is a great way to express our feelings. And.

✓ And I think it is a great way to express our feelings.

句子末尾的And多余，造成句子结构不完整，应删除。