Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and correct minor grammar/word-choice issues. Start with a clear topic sentence, then briefly describe the techniques and give a short example of how you use one. Limit to 2–4 sentences and avoid redundancy (e.g., "memorize" repeated).

예시: I’m reasonably good at memorizing, though not instantly. I rely on techniques like the Feynman method and the blurting method: for example, I use the Feynman method to explain a concept aloud in simple words, then identify gaps and revise until I can recall it clearly.

제안: Provide a clearer direct answer and give one specific example that illustrates the point. Avoid repeating phrases and the vague qualifier "maybe." Use linking words like "however" to add a brief detail.

예시: Generally no, I haven't forgotten anything very important. However, I did once forget to study for a minor test because I misread the schedule, and that taught me to double-check deadlines in my planner.

제안: Focus on concrete daily reminders and reduce philosophical wording. Start with a direct topic sentence naming practical things you must remember (e.g., appointments, tasks), then add one brief personal principle. Correct minor grammar and avoid repetition.

예시: In daily life I need to remember appointments, deadlines and small chores like grocery shopping. I also remind myself not to aim for perfection: for instance, I schedule short breaks during study sessions so I can stay productive without getting overwhelmed.

제안: This is a clear and practical answer; make it slightly more concise and add a short example of how these tools work together. Use linking words to connect ideas (e.g., "for example", "then").

예시: I take notes and use a digital calendar with alarms to remember important tasks. For example, I add deadlines to my calendar and set two reminders—one a day before and another an hour before—so I don’t miss anything.

× I'm not really the type of person who can memorize something at a glance, but I use certain techniques such as Feynman or blurting method for me to memorize things.

✓ I'm not really the type of person who can memorize something at a glance, but I use certain techniques such as the Feynman technique or the blurting method to help me memorize things.

The original sentence misuses 'for me to memorize things' after listing techniques. After verbs like 'use' and nouns naming techniques, use an infinitive of purpose ('to help me memorize') or restructure with 'to help' rather than 'for me to'. Also article use: 'Feynman' should be 'the Feynman technique' and 'blurting method' should be 'the blurting method' for clarity.

× Honestly, no, I don't think I have forgotten anything important apart from maybe a test or some lessons that I may have forgotten to study for.

✓ Honestly, no, I don't think I have forgotten anything important apart from maybe a test or some lessons that I may have forgotten to study for.

This sentence is acceptable grammatically; it uses present perfect 'have forgotten' correctly to talk about past events with present relevance. No change needed. (Included to indicate no correction required.)

× Apart from that, there are no such important things that I've forgotten.

✓ Apart from that, there are no other important things that I've forgotten.

The phrase 'no such important things' is awkward. 'Other important things' is a clearer, more natural collocation. The structure is adjusted to improve idiomatic word order and clarity.

× As cliche as it may sound, I constantly remind myself that it's OK to breathe and to live in the moment.

✓ As cliche9 as it may sound, I constantly remind myself that it's OK to breathe and to live in the moment.

Spelling of 'cliche' should be cliche9 (accent optional in informal writing). Grammatically the sentence is fine; correction is orthographic for standard written English.

× Apart from that, I like to always think that it's better to take break, to make mistakes and keep going, rather than to pressure yourself from from being perfect and not do it at all.

✓ Apart from that, I like to always think that it's better to take a break, to make mistakes and keep going, rather than to pressure yourself into being perfect and not do it at all.

Multiple issues: missing article 'a' before 'break' (article error), duplicated 'from from', incorrect preposition 'from' before 'being perfect' should be 'into' to express becoming or forcing someone, and overall phrasing improved. Also maintain consistent pronoun perspective: 'yourself' is fine if addressing general advice, but could be changed to 'yourself' remains.

× Apart from taking down notes and jotting down important things, I like to use a calendar and remind myself or I set an alarm for certain occasions or time that I need to accomplish certain things.

✓ Apart from taking down notes and jotting down important things, I like to use a calendar to remind myself, or I set an alarm for certain occasions or times when I need to accomplish things.

Problems: 'and remind myself or I set an alarm' is awkwardly connected; use 'to remind myself' to show purpose or separate clauses with a comma. 'Certain occasions or time' should be plural 'times' and 'when' clarifies the clause. This corrects sentence structure and plurality.