Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler sounds (uh, umm), and limit to 3–4 sentences. Give one specific example of a memorising technique and explain briefly why it works using a linking word (for example, because or so).

예시: Yes, I’m quite good at memorising things. For example, I can learn a new word in about three to five minutes by using it in a sentence and repeating it aloud, so it sticks in my long-term memory.

제안: Answer directly with a clear timeline and cause, avoid awkward phrasing. Use linking words (because, so) to explain reason and include one specific detail about what was forgotten and the consequence. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, I once forgot something important about three years ago. Because I was very busy studying, I forgot to buy daily groceries my mother asked for, so our family had to go back to the store later.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence listing key items you must remember, then give one or two specific examples and use linking words (for example, such as) to connect ideas. Remove fillers and unclear phrases like 'daily physical historic research.'

예시: I need to remember several daily tasks, such as my study schedule and errands. For example, I follow a to-do list every day to remind myself of classes, homework and any school research projects.

제안: Give a clear method: state whether you use memory techniques or tools. Avoid saying it's 'complicated' or contradictory claims like 'I don’t use tools' then 'it's so easy.' Explain one technique with a reason and example, using linking words (because, so, therefore).

예시: I usually rely on mental organisation rather than tools. For instance, I use a simple mental checklist and repeat important tasks aloud because repeating them helps me remember, so I rarely need written reminders.

× Yes, I'm good at memorizing everything.

✓ Yes, I'm good at memorizing things.

Using 'everything' is natural but here 'things' fits better in spoken context; no grammatical error but stylistic improvement: use 'things' to match common collocation 'good at memorizing things.'

× I can remember a word forever.

✓ I can remember a word forever.

Sentence is grammatically correct; no change needed. It uses modal 'can' + base verb correctly to express ability.

× Just take me about, uh, 3 minutes or 5 minutes to memorize it all.

✓ It just takes me about three to five minutes to memorize it.

Original lacks correct subject-verb structure: 'Just take me' should be 'It takes me.' Use singular subject 'it' with 'takes' (present simple). Use number format consistency and a range 'three to five minutes.' This fixes sentence structure and subject-verb agreement.

× Umm, it's quite interesting and amusing to memorize things.

✓ Umm, it's quite interesting and amusing to memorize things.

Grammatically correct: 'to memorize' is an infinitive used appropriately after 'interesting and amusing.' No correction needed.

× Well yes, I have definitely ever forgotten something crucial for my life.

✓ Well yes, I have definitely forgotten something crucial in my life.

Use of 'ever' with present perfect in this context is awkward; 'ever' is usually used in questions or negative contexts. 'For my life' is unnatural; use 'in my life' or 'important in my life.' Present perfect 'have forgotten' is appropriate to connect past event to present.

× It's about 3 years ago.

✓ It was about three years ago.

When specifying a past time ('three years ago'), use simple past ('was'), not 'it's/it is.' Also write numbers as words in formal speech. This corrects tense consistency.

× Anytime my mother has told me to buy and purchase something for a daily routine, but I've just forgotten that by the consequence of study.

✓ Whenever my mother asked me to buy something for our daily routine, I just forgot because of studying.

Problems: tense mixing and conjunction misuse. Use simple past 'asked' for a specific past habit; 'buy and purchase' is redundant so use one verb. 'Anytime' better as 'whenever.' 'But' is unnecessary; use 'because' to show reason. 'By the consequence of study' is unnatural; use 'because of studying.' This fixes tense, redundancy, conjunction, and prepositional choice.

× Well, I require to remember a lot of things in my daily routine.

✓ Well, I need to remember a lot of things in my daily routine.

'Require' is transitive and not used with infinitive 'to remember' in this context; 'need to' is the natural verb for obligation/necessity. This corrects verb choice and verb pattern.

× I have to remember what to do and how to do umm, on a list in one day.

✓ I have to remember what to do and how to do things from a list each day.

Original has misplaced preposition 'on' and awkward phrasing. Use 'things' to complete 'how to do,' and 'from a list each day' clarifies meaning. This corrects preposition use and sentence structure.

× Uh, such as study or uh, daily physical historic research in school.

✓ For example, studying or daily physical and historical research at school.

Original mixes noun forms and adjective order. Use gerund 'studying' to match 'research.' 'Physical historic' is incorrect adjective order and word choice; separate into 'physical and historical research.' Use 'at school' for location.

× Well, that's complicated question.

✓ Well, that's a complicated question.

Missing article 'a' before 'complicated question.' Adding 'a' fixes noun phrase structure.

× I always remember crucial things in my mind.

✓ I always remember important things in my mind.

'Crucial' is not wrong but 'important' is more natural collocation here. No pronoun error; this is a stylistic suggestion to improve naturalness.

× I don't use any tools or any maps to, umm, pinpoint something, and I just remember something vital and crucial for my life.

✓ I don't use any tools or maps to pinpoint things; I just remember what is vital for my life.

Avoid redundancy 'any tools or any maps' -> 'any tools or maps.' 'Pinpoint something' is vague; 'pinpoint things' or 'what to do' is clearer. Rephrase second clause to 'I just remember what is vital.' This fixes redundancy and clarity.

× That's so easy.

✓ That's so easy.

Grammatically correct as spoken comment; no change needed.