バンド 7 の例
トピック: Describe your perfect job
例
Step 1: Identify the Part 2 question requirements. The question asks you to describe your perfect job. You should mention: - What the job is - Where you heard about it from - What you need to learn to get the job - And explain why you think it is your perfect job Step 2: Strategies for a better answer - Expand your answer with more details or extra stories: Give background about your interests, how you discovered the job, and your aspirations. - Coherence is important: Make sure each point logically connects to the next. - Paraphrasing: Use synonyms for “perfect job” such as “ideal career” or “dream occupation.” - Referring: Refer back to previous points to show connections. - Signposting: Use phrases like “Firstly,” “Another reason,” “In addition,” and “To sum up.” - Vocabulary needs to be appropriate as well as varied: Use job-related and ambition-related vocabulary. - Using synonyms or substitution: Vary your language when talking about the job and your skills. - Demonstrating a range of grammar is key factor: Use a mix of tenses, conditionals, and complex sentences. - Whole Model Answer MUST be more than 300 words. Topic:My Dream Job as a Travel Writer What it is If I could choose any job in the world, my perfect job would be to become a travel writer. This is a profession where you get paid to visit different places around the globe, experience their cultures, and then write articles, blogs, or even books about your adventures. I have always been passionate about both traveling and writing, so combining these two interests into a single career seems like the ideal path for me. Travel writers often work for magazines, online platforms, or even as freelancers, and their main responsibility is to share their experiences in a way that inspires others to explore the world. Where you heard about it from I first heard about this job when I was in high school. I used to read National Geographic and Lonely Planet magazines, and I was fascinated by the stories of people who traveled to exotic destinations and wrote about their journeys. Later, I discovered several travel blogs and YouTube channels where people documented their trips and shared tips for other travelers. These sources really opened my eyes to the possibility of making a living by exploring new places and sharing those experiences with a wider audience. What you need to learn to get the job To become a successful travel writer, there are several skills and areas of knowledge I would need to develop. Firstly, I would need to improve my writing skills, especially in storytelling and descriptive writing, so that I can capture the essence of a place and make readers feel like they are there with me. In addition, I would need to learn about photography and videography, since visual content is essential for modern travel writing. Understanding digital marketing and social media would also be important, as many travel writers promote their work online. Finally, I would need to be adaptable and open-minded, since traveling often involves unexpected challenges and new experiences. And explain why you think it is your perfect job The reason I consider travel writing to be my perfect job is that it combines my greatest passions: exploring new cultures, meeting different people, and expressing myself through writing. I love the idea of having the freedom to travel and the opportunity to inspire others to step out of their comfort zones. Moreover, this job would allow me to continuously learn and grow, both personally and professionally. I believe that being a travel writer would never get boring, as every trip would bring new stories and adventures. In short, it would be a fulfilling and exciting career that matches my interests and ambitions perfectly.
ステップ1：パート2の質問の要件を特定する。 この質問はあなたの理想の仕事について説明するよう求めています。以下の点について言及してください： - その仕事が何か - どこでその仕事を知ったか - その仕事に就くために学ぶ必要があること - そして、なぜそれが自分にとって完璧な仕事だと思うのかを説明する ステップ2：より良い回答のための戦略 - 詳細や追加の話を加えて回答を広げる：自分の興味の背景、その仕事を知ったきっかけ、そして抱負を述べる。 - 一貫性が重要：各ポイントが論理的につながっていることを確認する。 - 言い換え：「完璧な仕事」の代わりに「理想のキャリア」や「夢の職業」などの同義語を使う。 - 参照：先のポイントに戻ってつながりを示す。 - 案内表現を使う：「まず第一に」「もう一つの理由」「さらに」「まとめると」などのフレーズを使う。 - 語彙は適切でかつ多様であること：仕事や野望に関連する語彙を使う。 - 同義語や置き換えを用いる：仕事やスキルについて話す際に言葉を変える。 - 幅広い文法の使用が重要：時制、条件文、複雑な文を混ぜて使う。 - モデル回答全体は300語以上であること。 テーマ：私の夢の仕事、トラベルライター 何の仕事か もし世界中のどんな仕事でも選べるとしたら、私の完璧な仕事はトラベルライターになることです。これは世界の様々な場所を訪れ、その文化を体験し、冒険について記事やブログ、あるいは本を書く職業です。私は旅行と執筆の両方にいつも情熱を持っていたので、この二つの興味を一つのキャリアに結びつけることは理想的な道のように思えます。トラベルライターは雑誌やオンラインプラットフォーム、またはフリーランスとして働くことが多く、主な仕事は自分の経験を他の人が世界を探検したくなるような形で伝えることです。 どこで知ったか この仕事を初めて知ったのは高校生の時でした。私はナショナルジオグラフィックやロンリープラネットの雑誌を読んでいて、エキゾチックな目的地を旅してその旅について書く人々の話に魅了されました。後に、いくつかのトラベルブログやYouTubeチャンネルを発見し、そこで人々が旅行の記録を残し、他の旅行者へのアドバイスを共有しているのを見ました。これらの情報源は、旅をしながら生計を立て、多くの人と経験を分かち合う可能性に目を開かせてくれました。 仕事に就くために学ぶべきこと 成功するトラベルライターになるためには、いくつかのスキルと知識の分野を身につける必要があります。まず第一に、場所の本質を捉え、読者にそこにいるかのように感じさせるストーリーテリングや描写力を特に磨く必要があります。加えて、写真やビデオ撮影についても学ぶべきです。現代のトラベルライティングには視覚的なコンテンツが不可欠だからです。デジタルマーケティングやソーシャルメディアの理解も重要です。多くのトラベルライターが自分の作品をオンラインで宣伝しているためです。最後に、旅は予期せぬ挑戦や新しい経験を伴うことが多いため、柔軟性と開かれた心を持つことが必要です。 なぜそれが完璧な仕事だと思うかの説明 私がトラベルライターを完璧な仕事だと考える理由は、それが私の最大の情熱を組み合わせているからです。新しい文化を探検し、様々な人々と出会い、書くことで自己表現ができることです。自由に旅をするというアイデアや、他の人々が安全圏を出るきっかけを与えられる機会が大好きです。さらに、この仕事は個人的にも職業的にも絶えず学び成長できる場を提供してくれます。旅のたびに新しい物語や冒険があり、決して退屈にならないと思います。つまり、それは私の興味や野望に完全に合致した充実し刺激的なキャリアです。
文法分析
- **複雑な文と従属節:** 回答は、「If I could choose any job in the world, my perfect job would be to become a travel writer」や「To become a successful travel writer, there are several skills and areas of knowledge I would need to develop」のような複雑な文構造を巧みに使いこなしています。これらの文は条件節や関係節を用いており、高得点帯に特徴的です。 - **時制の多様性:** 回答は、現在形（「I love the idea…」）、現在完了形（「I have always been passionate…」）、過去形（「I first heard about this job when I was in high school」）、条件法（「If I could choose…」）など、さまざまな時制を適切に使用しています。この多様性は文法の柔軟性と正確さを示しています。 - **受動態:** 回答には、「This is a profession where you get paid to visit different places…」や「visual content is essential for modern travel writing」のような受動態の表現が含まれており、より高度な英語の特徴です。 - **結束手段と指示語の使用:** 「Firstly」、「In addition」、「Moreover」、「Finally」、「In short」などの接続詞や指示語を使うことで、回答が論理的に整理され、一貫性が向上しています。 - **関係節:** 「I used to read National Geographic and Lonely Planet magazines, and I was fascinated by the stories of people who traveled to exotic destinations and wrote about their journeys」のような文は、関係節を用いて詳細や複雑さを加えています。
語彙
  • - **Job-related Vocabulary:** “profession,” “career,” “responsibility,” “freelancers,” “magazines,” “online platforms,” “digital marketing,” “social media,” “promote their work,” “audience.”
    - **仕事に関連する語彙:** “profession,” “career,” “responsibility,” “freelancers,” “magazines,” “online platforms,” “digital marketing,” “social media,” “promote their work,” “audience.”
  • - **Travel and Writing Vocabulary:** “travel writer,” “adventures,” “exploring new cultures,” “descriptive writing,” “storytelling,” “capture the essence,” “photography and videography,” “visual content,” “documented their trips,” “exotic destinations.”
    - **旅行と執筆の語彙:** “travel writer,” “adventures,” “exploring new cultures,” “descriptive writing,” “storytelling,” “capture the essence,” “photography and videography,” “visual content,” “documented their trips,” “exotic destinations.”
  • - **Ambition and Personal Growth Vocabulary:** “passionate,” “ideal path,” “combining these two interests,” “inspire others,” “step out of their comfort zones,” “continuously learn and grow,” “fulfilling and exciting career,” “matches my interests and ambitions perfectly.”
    - **野心と自己成長の語彙:** “passionate,” “ideal path,” “combining these two interests,” “inspire others,” “step out of their comfort zones,” “continuously learn and grow,” “fulfilling and exciting career,” “matches my interests and ambitions perfectly.”
  • - **Adjectives and Descriptive Language:** “fascinated,” “adaptable,” “open-minded,” “unexpected challenges,” “wider audience,” “boring,” “new stories and adventures.”
    - **形容詞と描写言語:** “fascinated,” “adaptable,” “open-minded,” “unexpected challenges,” “wider audience,” “boring,” “new stories and adventures.”
  • - **Collocations and Phrases:** “make a living by,” “expressing myself through writing,” “opened my eyes to the possibility,” “capture the essence of a place,” “matches my interests and ambitions,” “never get boring.”
    - **コロケーションとフレーズ:** “make a living by,” “expressing myself through writing,” “opened my eyes to the possibility,” “capture the essence of a place,” “matches my interests and ambitions,” “never get boring.”
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