Shopping— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答要直接并注意语法与句子简洁。建议用一两个句子做主题句，然后用一两个简短句子补充原因或例子，避免冗长和重复。注意动词形式（shopping → shop）和介词搭配（for a cause → for a purchase / for a specific reason）。

例: I enjoy shopping, but I prefer planned shopping rather than browsing aimlessly. For example, I usually make a list of essentials beforehand, which helps me shop quickly and avoid getting tired.

提案: 要更自然并减少口语填充词。先给出直接回答，再用一到两句简要解释理由并提供具体细节，如如何比较（比对品牌、查看促销、用比价APP等）。注意语法（when I shopping → when I shop; I haven't any income → I don't have an income）。

例: Yes, I always compare prices because I'm a student and need to save money. For instance, I check different stores online, compare brands, and use price-comparison apps to find the best deals.

提案: 回答要更有条理并完整表达判断。先明确表示通常是否困难，再用一两句说明何种情况下会难以选择并举例。减少犹豫词和重复，注意语法（It's actually depends → It actually depends; difficult for me choosing → difficult for me to choose）。

例: It depends — sometimes it's difficult to choose, especially when there are many similar options. For example, if two shirts look alike but have different prices, I spend time comparing quality and reviews before deciding.

提案: 回答观点明确，但需更规范的语法和更具体的支持细节。先直接回答（No），然后给出两到三个具体原因或例子（例如质量、品牌溢价、设计、耐用性），并用连词使逻辑更清晰。注意主谓一致（Some expensive products is → are）。

例: No, expensive products are not always better. While some high-priced items offer better materials or craftsmanship, others mainly reflect brand prestige or fashion trends rather than superior quality.

× I only shopping when I have clear needs like daily essentials or something I planned for on cause in this way I can shopping very easily and less tiring for me.

✓ I only shop when I have clear needs, like daily essentials or something I planned for; this way I can shop more easily and feel less tired.

原句中多次錯誤使用動詞的 -ing 形式（shopping）代替應使用的基礎動詞形式（shop）。在英文中，當動詞作為一般現在時的主要動作時，不應使用動名詞形式，除非前面有適當的動詞或介詞搭配（例如 enjoy shopping）。另外，句子也需要連接詞或標點來分段，使結構更清晰。建議記住：主語 + 一般現在時動詞（I shop），在表示頻率或習慣時使用一般現在時；若要表示“更不累”，用 feel less tired 或 be less tired。

× I always compare the prices when I shopping 'cause I'm a student now, so I haven't any income uh, so I always choose some cost effective products for saving money, yeah.

✓ I always compare the prices when I shop, 'cause I'm a student now, so I don't have any income. I always choose cost-effective products to save money.

此句中 “when I shopping” 應為一般現在時的動詞 shop，而不是 shopping。此外，‘I haven't any income’ 為不地道的表達，應改為 I don't have any income。最後 ‘for saving money’ 應改為不定式 to save money 或者用 -ing 構造但需調整句子（e.g. to save money 更自然）。建議：在表示習慣性動作時用一般現在時（I shop），表示目的時用 to + 動詞原形。

× It's actually depends, sometimes it's pretty difficult for me choosing when I shop.

✓ It actually depends; sometimes it's pretty difficult for me to choose when I shop.

原句 'It's actually depends' 主詞與動詞不匹配，正確應為 It actually depends（不加助動詞）。此外，'difficult for me choosing' 應使用不定式結構 to choose（difficult + for + 人 + to do sth）。建議：記住固定表達 depends（主語 it + 動詞 depends），以及形容詞 + for + 人 + to do 結構。

× Some expensive products is a status symbol for the richer people and uh, they see these products like, uh, long term investments or, uh, fashion statement or something.

✓ Some expensive products are a status symbol for richer people, and they see these products as long-term investments or fashion statements.

原句中主語 Some expensive products 為複數，動詞卻用單數 is，應改為複數 are，這是主謂一致錯誤（第三人稱複數）。此外，'see... like' 用法不夠準確，應為 see ... as 表達“視為”。名詞複數也應一致（fashion statements）。建議：注意主語是否為單數或複數，動詞需相應變化；固定搭配 see ... as。