Shopping— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 在回答时注意语法和用词的自然性，简洁表达并保持句子流畅。可以用更地道的短语如“relax/relieve stress”并避免重复。回答不超过5句，先给出主题句，再用一两句具体说明和例子。

例: Yes, I enjoy shopping because it helps me relax after a stressful day. For example, I often go shopping with friends at the weekend, which cheers me up and gives me a break from studying.

提案: 注意语法时态和数量表达（例如"I don't have much money"）。使用连贯词来组织理由，避免冗长重复。尽量用具体例子说明省钱的方式。

例: Yes, I usually compare prices because I'm a student and don't have much money. For instance, I check online reviews and compare retailers so I can buy more items within my budget.

提案: 回答要更自然，避免多余的助词和重复（如"to buy it"）。可以用连接词说明原因并给出具体情境。保持句子简洁明了。

例: Sometimes I find it hard to choose because there are many similar options. In that case I usually ask a friend for advice, since they know my style and help me decide quickly.

提案: 回答不完整且语法混乱，需把观点完整表达并用具体比较说明。避免口头语（uh, umm），并用连接词（for example, however）来组织句子。给出明确结论和示例。

例: I think it depends. For simple items like socks, I prefer cheaper ones, but for useful or long-lasting products such as a laptop, I usually opt for a more expensive, higher-quality option.

× Yes, I really enjoy shopping because it can relax me down and often I will choose to shop after a very big stress and go shopping with my friends.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy shopping because it helps me relax, and I often choose to go shopping after a stressful time and go with my friends.

句中“relax me down”用法不自然，应使用动词短语“help/helps someone relax”或“relax”本身；“after a very big stress”名词搭配错误，应改为“after a stressful time”或“after a lot of stress”；“choose to shop”可以改为更自然的“choose to go shopping”。这些改动涉及动词+ -ing 形式和固定搭配，建议多学习动词短语和常用搭配。

× Yes I will because as I am still a student now I didn't have enough so many money to get some very expensive goods and also I enjoy saving money by compare the prices and I can buy more things I like.

✓ Yes, I do, because as I am still a student I don't have enough money to buy very expensive items, and I also enjoy saving money by comparing prices so I can buy more things I like.

句中“You didn't have enough so many money”中的量词和时态混用错误：应使用“don't have enough money”或“don't have much money”；“by compare the prices”应使用动名词“by comparing prices”。此外把“will”改为一般现在时“do”更符合现在习惯。建议练习可数/不可数名词和动名词用法。

× Yes, maybe a little bit for me, because it's hard for me to decide which one is better to buy it. And at that time I usually will ask for my friends to make this decision.

✓ Yes, maybe a little bit for me, because it's hard for me to decide which one is better to buy. At that time I usually ask my friends to help me decide.

句中“which one is better to buy it”存在多余代词“it”导致句子结构错误；“usually will ask for my friends to make this decision”中主谓无需过去或将来时，改为一般现在时“usually ask”更自然，并将短语改为“ask my friends to help me decide”更符合英语搭配。注意主谓一致与代词位置。

× I think it depends. Umm, for example, when I choose some very, uh, simple items and very just I will choose the cheaper one, but when I will buy some very useful items, I mainly choose the.

✓ I think it depends. For example, when I choose simple items, I usually choose the cheaper one, but when I buy something more useful, I mainly choose the more expensive one.

句中多处时态和词序问题：不应使用“when I will buy”这样的将来式，应该用一般现在时“when I buy”；“very, uh, simple items and very just”不正确，应简化为“simple items”；句尾缺失比较对象“more expensive one”。建议掌握条件句和时间状语从句中常用的一般现在时，以及常见比较句型。