Gifts— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答缺乏清晰性和连贯性，语法和词汇错误影响理解。要直接回答问题的主题句，然后用1–2个支持句解释原因，使用连接词提高连贯性，注意时态和词语搭配（如 give/send a gift, spend a lot of money）。

例: I'm not very good at giving gifts. I often find it hard to choose something the person truly wants, so my presents may miss the mark. Also, I dislike spending a lot of money on non-essential items, which limits my choices.

提案: 回答重复且有语法问题，信息可更具体。先直接回答时间或场合（e.g. birthdays, festivals），然后说明原因并给具体例子。避免重复词并用连接词如 because, so, therefore。

例: I usually give gifts on special occasions like birthdays and holidays to my family and closest friends, because they are the most important people to me and I want to show appreciation without overspending.

提案: 回答总体方向正确，但存在双重否定和句子结构问题。应使用更自然的表达并给出具体标准及例子，使用连接词（first, second, for example）。注意疑问句与陈述句区分。

例: First, I consider whether the person will actually like the gift; nobody wants something they dislike. Second, I think about practicality — for example, choosing a useful item like a thermos for someone who commutes daily.

提案: 时态和表达不自然（had given, hand make）。先直接回答然后补充细节并反思经验教训，说明为什么不再制作手工礼物，或何种情况下会再尝试。使用连接词如 but, so, since then。

例: Yes, I once made a hammock for my ex-boyfriend, but he didn't like it. Since then I haven't made handmade gifts, because I worry they might not match the recipient's taste.

提案: 观点明确且有例子，但措辞和句子结构有误（require their favors, equally cost）。建議用更准确的短语（feel obliged, reciprocate）并扩展说明为什么 modest gifts can be meaningful. 保持1–3句简洁有力。

例: No, I don't think expensive gifts express feelings better. They can make the recipient feel pressured or obliged to reciprocate; a modest, thoughtful gift often shows care without creating discomfort.

× I'm not good at giving gifts. More clearly, I sell them send a gift to someone.

✓ I'm not good at giving gifts. More precisely, I feel stressed when I have to send a gift to someone.

句子结构混乱。原句“More clearly, I sell them send a gift to someone.”包含不相关的词（sell them）且动词搭配错误。应使用短语“feel stressed when I have to send a gift to someone”或“find it difficult to choose gifts”来表达更清晰的意思。建议：去掉多余词汇，使用正确的动词短语连接主句与从句。

× This is the reason I can't understand what people want.

✓ This is the reason I can't understand what people want.

句子本身语法正确，但可改进为更自然的表达，例如“This is why I can't understand what people want.”。不过按题目要求只改符合问题类型的错误，此处可保留原句或用更自然的连词。

× And also, I think it was a lot of money on something that's not vital.

✓ Also, I think it's a lot of money to spend on something that's not essential.

原句中时态与结构不当：“it was a lot of money on something”不符合英语习惯，应使用不定式结构“to spend on”或形容词“it's a lot of money to spend”。另外“vital”可用“essential”更自然。建议：使用固定表达“it's a lot of money to spend on...”来表达花费大量金钱在非必需品上。

× I give gifts to my family members and my best friends only because I don't want to spend a lot of money on the gift.

✓ I give gifts to my family members and my best friends only because I don't want to spend a lot of money on gifts.

名词复数使用不当。前半句可保留，现在时正确，但结尾用单数“the gift”不如复数“gifts”通顺。建议统一使用复数形式谈一般性行为。

× But the family members and my best friends are the important character in my life.

✓ But my family members and best friends are important characters in my life.

“the important character”使用不当：people应为复数且不用定冠词“the”。应为“important characters”或更自然说“important people”。建议用“important people in my life”。

× So I would like to give a response response.

✓ So I would like to show my appreciation.

重复词“response response”且结构不清。英语中不常用“give a response”表达“表示感谢/回应礼物”的意思。建议用更自然的短语如“show my appreciation”或“give a thoughtful reply”。

× Whether people love the gift is my first concern.

✓ Whether people will like the gift is my first concern.

时态和动词搭配更自然应为“will like”或“like”。原句用“love”语气过强且“Whether...is my first concern”可接受，但更自然的搭配是“Whether people will like the gift”。建议使用“will like”表达对将来接受度的关注。

× I think not no one wants to accept a gift that they are not like at all.

✓ I think no one wants to accept a gift that they don't like at all.

句子存在双重否定“not no one”，且从句中代词与动词搭配错误，应为“they don't like”。建议去掉多余否定并调整从句为“that they don't like”。

× And the second is it useful in other daily life?

✓ And secondly, is it useful in daily life?

句子语序不当。疑问句应以助动词开头：“Is it useful in daily life?” 同时“the second is”可改为“secondly”。建议按疑问句语序把助动词提前并用“daily life”表达惯用搭配。

× I had given a hammock for my ex boyfriend, but my ex boyfriend didn't like it at all.

✓ I gave a hammock to my ex-boyfriend, but he didn't like it at all.

过去完成时“had given”不合上下文，应使用一般过去时“gave”。此外介词应为“give ... to ...”，“ex boyfriend”中间需连字符更常见且代词可简化为“he”。建议在叙述过去事件时使用一般过去时并用正确介词。

× So since that I never do a hand make gift for anyone.

✓ So since then I never made a handmade gift for anyone.

多处错误：时间短语应为“since then”，否定过去经历用一般过去时“never made”，以及“hand make gift”不合适，应为“handmade gift”。建议使用“since then” + 过去时，并使用复合形容词“handmade”。

× Do expensive gifts better express your feelings?

✓ Do expensive gifts better express your feelings?

题干为考官问题，该句语法正确，属于比较结构的疑问句，无需改动。

× I think very expensive gifts can make people feel pressure and uncomfortable because they may worry about how to require their favors.

✓ I think very expensive gifts can make people feel pressured and uncomfortable because they may worry about how to reciprocate favors.

用词不当：应使用形容词“pressured”而不是名词“pressure”。短语“require their favors”错误，应为“reciprocate favors”或“return the favor”。建议用“feel pressured”并用“reciprocate”表达回报义务感。

× For example, a friend who received an expensive present might feel obliged to buy something equally cost in return.

✓ For example, a friend who received an expensive present might feel obliged to buy something of equal cost in return.

词组“equally cost”不正确，正确搭配为“of equal cost”或“equally expensive”。建议使用“of equal cost”或“equally expensive”来表示价值相当。