Gifts— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答直接但有语法和用词错误，且略显冗长。建议用一到两句明确表达观点，然后补充简短原因。注意时态和动词形式（例如：I usually / I ask）。可以把“positively”替换为更合适的词，如“usually”或“always”。

例: Not really. I usually ask my girlfriend what she would like because I'm not sure what others prefer, so I prefer to be safe and choose something she specifically mentions.

提案: 回答内容明确但表达混乱，有语法错误和不恰当词汇（例如“return the free”）。建议用一到三句清晰说明时间和理由，避免口头语“umm”。可以用连接词如“because”或“so”来衔接句子。

例: I usually give gifts on birthdays because it's an important day for people. I also feel it's polite to give something back when someone gives me a present.

提案: 回答包含不恰当内容和重复错误（如“my my”，“free mile”），用词不礼貌（提到香烟作为礼物可能不合适）。建议先说明主要考虑因素（兴趣、年龄、relationship），并给出礼物类型的具体例子，避免概括性或冒犯性描述。

例: I consider the person's interests and age. For example, I might buy sports shoes for a close friend who likes running, or skincare products for a female friend who cares about cosmetics.

提案: 回答清晰且内容具体，但有重复和用词冗余（“decorate decorative”）。建议用一到两句改进表达，避免重复，并可补充简单原因说明为什么制作该礼物。

例: Yes, I made a small decorative house with tiny lights and gave it to my girlfriend for Christmas because I wanted to create something personal and cozy.

提案: 回答逻辑清晰、用词恰当，且有具体例子。可以进一步提高自然度，通过一个连接词扩展原因并保持简洁。注意单复数和冠词使用（a handmade card）。

例: I don't think expensive gifts are better. I prefer gifts that show effort, like a handmade card or a carefully chosen item, because they demonstrate time and thought and feel more personal.

× Actually no, because I don't know what gifts people like and so every time my girlfriend had a birthday I will positively ask her what gift she like.

✓ Actually no, because I don't know what gifts people like, so every time it's my girlfriend's birthday I positively ask her what gift she likes.

原句时态和动词形式混用：先用一般现在时 (don't know, like)，却又用过去式 had 和将来/习惯用法 will，且宾语从句中动词单数第三人称未加 -s（she like）。应保持一致使用一般现在时来表达习惯性动作；另外名词性短语的所有格要用 my girlfriend's birthday。建议多用一般现在时描述习惯或常态，注意第三人称单数动词加 -s。

× When is someone's birthday, I usually give them a gift because it's umm important day for anyone and I also received the gifts from them so I will return the free.

✓ When it's someone's birthday, I usually give them a gift because it's an important day for anyone, and I also receive gifts from them so I will return the favor.

原句中缺少 be 动词（When is someone's birthday 应为 When it's someone's birthday），并且冠词使用错误（important day 前应有不定冠词 an）。received 使用过去式不符合描述习惯性行为，应为 receive。最后一部分表达不清（return the free），应为 return the favor（回赠）。建议使用完整的 be 结构，注意冠词和时态一致性，并使用常见固定搭配。

× I will consider about their sex.

✓ I will consider their sex.

动词 consider 后不接介词 about（不要说 consider about），直接跟宾语或从句。原句多余介词导致搭配错误。建议记住常见动词搭配（如 consider + 对象）。

× For my my old friends I will give them ball shoes and cigarettes, but for my free mile friends I will give them the cosmetics.

✓ For my old friends I will give them sneakers and cigarettes, but for my close friends I will give them cosmetics.

原句用词错误和重复（my my），free mile friends 不是正确表达，应为 close friends 或 good friends；ball shoes 更常用词是 sneakers。the cosmetics 中不需要定冠词 the（此处泛指化妆品）。建议注意词汇准确性并去掉重复词。

× I made a small decorate decorative house with tiny lights and gave it to my girlfriend as a Christmas present.

✓ I made a small decorative house with tiny lights and gave it to my girlfriend as a Christmas present.

原句中 decorate 和 decorative 重复使用且结构混乱。应使用形容词 decorative 修饰 house，去掉多余的动词形式。建议区分动词（decorate）与形容词（decorative）的用法，按句子需要选择合适形式。

× Do expensive gifts better express your feelings?

✓ Do expensive gifts better express your feelings? (可接受)

该句语法结构本身可接受，但口语中更自然的表达为 "Do expensive gifts express your feelings better?"。原句词序略显不自然，建议将副词 better 放在动词之后以符合习惯语序。