Gifts— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答有明确的肯定，但存在语法错误、重复和表达不清的问题。建议：1) 简化句子，先给出主题句（Yes, I'm good at choosing gifts.）。2) 用一两个清晰的支持细节说明原因和例子（用途、场景）。3) 注意主谓一致和代词使用，避免重复。练习时可先在心中组织两到三句再回答。

例: Yes, I'm good at choosing gifts. For example, I often buy earphones for friends who study a lot because they need them for online classes. This kind of practical gift is usually appreciated.

提案: 回答结构清晰但有小语法和表达问题。建议：1) 以主题句开头（I usually give gifts on birthdays.）。2) 用连接词补充原因（because / so）并用正确的代词和时态。3) 可以增加一具体例子或习惯性细节来丰富内容。

例: I usually give gifts on birthdays because it's a special day to celebrate someone. For example, I always prepare a small present and a card to make my friend feel appreciated.

提案: 回答完整且具体，使用了例子，但可改进用词和流畅度。建议：1) 开头直接给出观点（I'm a practical person.）。2) 用连词自然连接理由和例子（therefore / for instance）。3) 尽量避免绝对词，说明考虑因素可以更多样化。

例: I'm a practical person, so I usually choose useful gifts. For instance, if I'm buying something for my parents, I might choose a smartphone because it helps them keep in touch and is very useful daily.

提案: 回答意思明确但表达混乱且有重复。建议：1) 用简短清晰的句子回答（Yes. I used to make handmade gifts when I was in primary school.）。2) 提供一两个具体细节（送给谁、是什么、为什么）。3) 减少犹豫词和重复，练习时可先默想完整句子。

例: Yes. When I was in primary school I often made handmade gifts for my teachers. For example, I painted pictures and gave them as presents to show my gratitude.

提案: 观点明确且理由合理，但句子可以更连贯且用词更准确。建议：1) 开头直接陈述立场（No, expensive gifts don't necessarily express feelings better.）。2) 用连接词给出原因并补充例子（because / for example）。3) 提到“价值”时解释什么构成价值（sentiment, usefulness）。

例: No, expensive gifts don't necessarily express feelings better because what matters is the thought behind the gift. For example, a small handmade card or a useful present can be more meaningful than an expensive item.

× Yes, I think here I'm good at selecting gifts to others and sometimes I would choose a earphone to to my friend because when they study I really she really think she really needs a earphone and I.

✓ Yes, I think I'm good at selecting gifts for others, and sometimes I choose earphones for my friends because when they study I think they need them.

原句存在多处问题：重复词汇（"to to"、"really she really" 等）和代词不一致（使用 they 与单数 friend 混用），以及冠词误用（a earphone 应为 earphones 或 an earphone，根据语境调整）。按照题意说的是一般习惯，因此用一般现在时（choose）。建议：去除重复词，使用 "for" 表示为某人挑选，复数或代词要一致，改用一般现在时。

× Well, most of the time I'd like to give them birthday gifts because I think it's an important day and at that day I hope them would feel happy.

✓ Well, most of the time I'd like to give them birthday gifts because I think it's an important day, and on that day I hope they feel happy.

原句中介词和人称代词使用不当：应使用介词 on 表示具体某日（not at that day），并且从句中主语和情态动词顺序错误（"I hope them would feel" 不合语法，应为 I hope they feel）。建议：将 "at" 改为 "on"，将 "them would" 改为主格 they + 现在时 feel。

× Well, actually I think I am a practical person, so when I select gifts, I prefer to buy practical gift for my friends or my parents. For example, if I need to buy a gift for my parents, I would buy a smartphone.

✓ Well, actually I think I am a practical person, so when I select gifts, I prefer to buy practical gifts for my friends or parents. For example, if I need to buy a gift for my parents, I would buy a smartphone.

原句中名词单复数和冠词不一致："a practical gift" 在此处泛指时应使用复数 gifts 或在特指时用 a practical gift，但前文用 prefer to buy practical gift（缺少冠词或复数）。建议将 gift 改为复数 gifts，保持与前面的复数主语一致。

× Yes, of course, but I remember that it when I, I, when I was in the primary school at the time, I always send my hand, hand, uh, made a gift to my teachers. Sometimes it's a painting.

✓ Yes, of course. I remember that when I was in primary school, I always sent my handmade gifts to my teachers. Sometimes it was a painting.

原句时态和动词形式错误：叙述过去的习惯应使用过去时（always sent），hand-made 应作为形容词修饰 gifts（或 "handmade a gift" 改为 "a handmade gift"）。另外，"in the primary school" 应为 "in primary school" 更地道。建议：使用过去时 sent，合并重复并改正词序为 "handmade gifts"，并将后句的 is 改为 was。

× Definitely not if people feel appreciated. I think even if the price is not too high, people would also feel happy. And I think the price is not the significant point. It depends on the value of the gift.

✓ Definitely not. If people feel appreciated, the price doesn't matter. I think even if the price is not too high, people can still feel happy. The price is not the most important thing; it depends on the value of the gift.

第一句断句和从句位置不当：原句 "Definitely not if people feel appreciated." 结构不完整，需将条件从句与主句位置调整为完整的陈述句。此外，"the significant point" 用法不自然，应改为 "the most important thing" 或 "the main point"。建议：把两句合并或重组成完整句子，保持语义清晰，并用习惯表达替换直译词汇。