Websites— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答要更简洁、语法更准确，并用连词让句子更连贯。可把主题句放在前面，随后给出具体细节并避免重复。例如说明具体网站类型、学习目的及频率。注意时态和主谓一致。

例: I often visit educational websites focused on listening and writing preparation because I am studying for an exam. For example, I use online courses and practice tests several times a week to improve my listening skills and essay writing.

提案: 回答要直接开门见山并给出简要原因和具体例子，避免语法错误和冗长。可以用一到两句话说明偏好并补充背景信息。

例: I don't really have a favourite website because I mainly use mobile apps like TikTok and WeChat. Before university I rarely used a computer, so apps have always been my main way to access content.

提案: 要更明确地描述变化并用连词连接想法，修正语法和词序。说明具体新功能如何影响你的使用习惯，并给出例子。避免不完整句子。

例: Yes, one change was on QQ Space, which added a feature that shows which friends are currently online. Because of this I now check the app more often to see who is available to chat.

提案: 回答应更准确地用词并组织句子，先给出主题句，再用连词和具体例子支持。避免重复并改正词汇搭配（例如 'social media apps' 而非 'socialized mobile apps'）。

例: Social media apps like TikTok are very popular in my country. People use them to watch short videos, chat with friends, and share funny clips every day.

提案: 要给出清晰的立场并用逻辑连词支持，注意单复数和固定搭配（information 不可数），避免啰嗦。可以举例说明何种信息更适合网站或书籍。

例: I prefer getting information from websites because they are more convenient and up to date. For instance, I can quickly search terms online to find recent research or tutorials, while books are better for in-depth study.

提案: 回答可更具体地说明你想建网站的目的和内容，用更地道的表达（e.g. 'express your ideas'，'private space'），并修正语法和代词使用。

例: Yes, I would. I've heard that AI tools can help create websites easily, and I would use one to share my ideas and keep a private space for personal writing and photos.

提案: 回答要更具体并确保句子完整，说明具体技能或课程來源（例如视频教程、论坛），并用连词连接观点。修正词汇搭配（a ton / online tutorials），避免混淆书籍与网站。

例: I've learned many practical skills from websites, such as cooking through online video tutorials. For my studies I also use educational forums and articles to find explanations before asking my teacher.

× At these days I often visit the study website such as the knowledge of listening and writing because I have to prepare the exam and also it can helps me develop my English ability a lot and I'd love to use them, it's very useful.

✓ Nowadays I often visit study websites about listening and writing because I have to prepare for exams. They help me improve my English a lot and I enjoy using them; they are very useful.

错误类型：现在时态和时态搭配不当。“At these days”不地道，改为Nowadays；“visit the study website”应为复数“study websites”；“because I have to prepare the exam”应为固定搭配“prepare for exams”；“it can helps”主语与动词形式不一致且多余助动词，应为“they help”；句子过长应拆分为两句以便清晰表达。建议：使用正确的时间短语（nowadays）、注意动词单复数和助动词使用，并把长句分成更清晰的短句。

× Actually I don't have my favorite website because I use the app more frequently such as TikTok and WeChat, and before I become a university student I even don't use the computer. So I just have my favorite apps and there is no my favorite website.

✓ Actually I don't have a favorite website because I use apps more frequently, such as TikTok and WeChat. Before I became a university student I didn't even use a computer. So I only have favorite apps and not a favorite website.

错误类型：代词和冠词使用不当及时态问题。原句中“my favorite website”重复且定冠词/所有格使用不自然，改为“a favorite website”；“before I become”应为过去时“became”；“I even don't use the computer”应为过去否定“didn't even use a computer”。建议：注意使用不定冠词'a'表示泛指，过去时间应使用过去时，并避免重复表达。

× I remember a significant change, it's the website that I often use to socialize called QQ space and it add a new function that can know other friends is using this app or not. I often use it to adjust my friend. Friend who didn't answer my message.

✓ I remember a significant change: the website I often use to socialize, called QQ Space, added a new function that shows whether friends are using the app. I often use it to contact friends who didn't answer my messages.

错误类型：冠词/时态和句子结构错误。原句中“it add”时态错误，应为过去式“added”；“can know other friends is using this app or not”不符合英语表达，改为“shows whether friends are using the app”；“adjust my friend”用词错误，应为“contact friends”；最后一句是片段句，需合并为完整句并修正“message”为复数“messages”。建议：注意动词时态一致、使用正确的动词短语（contact）、并将片段句改成完整句子。

× It must be the socialized mobile apps such as Tiktok. People always use it to watch some interesting video and they can chat on the apps with their friends and share the funny videos or people around me use it.

✓ They are probably social mobile apps such as TikTok. People use them to watch interesting videos, chat with friends, and share funny videos; a lot of people around me use them.

错误类型：句子结构混乱、代词与名词不一致、单复数错误。原句中“it must be”与复数主体不一致，应用“They”；“watch some interesting video”应为复数“videos”；“chat on the apps”应为“chat on the apps”但主语与动词数需一致；最后部分应作为独立句或用连接词连接。建议：确保主语和谓语在人称与数上保持一致，使用并列结构列出动作，并避免重复。

× I prefer the website because it's more convenient for people to search the knowledge and for me it's more convenient to use just the simple words to find what I have to learn. And the informations in the website are more cutting edge. It's more new to up to date which are used.

✓ I prefer websites because they are more convenient for people to search for information. For me it's easier to use simple words to find what I need to learn. The information on websites is more up-to-date and cutting-edge.

错误类型：量词/不可数名词和形容词用法错误。“the website”不应有定冠词且应为复数“websites”；“search the knowledge”应为“search for information”（information为不可数）；“informations”错误，改为“information”；“more new to up to date which are used”表达混乱，改为“more up-to-date and cutting-edge”。建议：注意不可数名词用法（information），使用正确形容词短语（up-to-date, cutting-edge），并保持句子简洁清晰。

× Yes, of course. Recently I've heard that there is AI can help us to build up our own website. I think it's a good way to express yourselves thinking and it's a good way for you to create a secret place for yourself, which is more privacy.

✓ Yes, of course. Recently I've heard that there is AI that can help us build our own websites. I think it's a good way to express your thoughts and to create a private space for yourself.

错误类型：情态/从句结构与形容词使用错误。原句“there is AI can help”缺少关系词“that”或应改为“AI can help”；“express yourselves thinking”错误，人称不一致且名词化错误，应为“express your thoughts”；“more privacy”用词不当，应为形容词“private”或名词“privacy”取决于句子，此处用“private space”。建议：注意关系从句结构、代词人称一致以及形容词/名词的正确选择。

× I have learned a tons of things from the website in my life. I learned how to cook a meal by myself in the books that others log in. And for my studies I often search knowledge which I can ask my teacher directly. It's very convenient.

✓ I have learned tons of things from websites in my life. I learned how to cook meals by myself from posts that others wrote. For my studies I often search for knowledge and can ask my teacher directly. It's very convenient.

错误类型：单复数、可数/不可数名词和搭配错误。“a tons of”错误，改为“tons of”或“a ton of”；“the website”应为复数“websites”或泛指；“cook a meal by myself in the books that others log in”表达混乱，推测为“from posts that others wrote”或“from online articles”；“search knowledge”应为“search for knowledge”。建议：注意可数与不可数名词搭配，使用正确的介词短语（search for, learn from），并用更自然的表达替代直译结构。