Websites— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答要更自然简洁，注意语法和句子连贯。开头应直接回应问题，用一到两句主题句说明常访问的网站类型，再补充具体细节并用连接词衔接。避免含糊或重复表达（如“prevent information clearly”应为“present information clearly”），并去掉填充词“uh”。

例: I often visit travel websites and map apps because they provide detailed itineraries and route suggestions. For example, I use travel blogs to read sample schedules and map apps to check transportation options and walking times, so I can plan each day efficiently.

提案: 要直接给出答案并用清晰语法说明原因。注意主谓一致（例如“which help me”应为“which helps me”或改写）。可以用一两个具体功能做支持细节，并用连词连接句子，使表达更自然。

例: My favorite website is a Chinese platform called Redbook. It combines travel guides, restaurant reviews and event listings, which helps me decide which places are worth visiting.

提案: 回答要更清晰并避免模糊表达（如“not aware of adding significant differences”不清楚）。用一个主题句说明是否有变化，然后用具体原因和例子支持。使用连接词如“however”或“unless”使逻辑更顺畅。

例: There haven't been many changes to the websites I use regularly. I only pay attention when updates improve functionality; otherwise I ignore cosmetic changes because they do not affect my daily use.

提案: 注意句子完整性和拼写错误（最后一句“so if both useful”应为“so it’s both useful”）。先给出总体类型，再用具体例子说明受欢迎的原因，避免罗列过多无结构的项目。

例: One very popular website is Redbook, which combines social networking, shopping and travel guides. Young people use it to read product reviews, share lifestyle tips and discover trendy items, so it is both useful and entertaining.

提案: 句子表达总体不错，但有词语错误（“and two books”应为“than books”）和格式问题（“in depth”应为“in-depth”）。起始句要直接比较，然后给出具体原因和场景支持。

例: I prefer getting information from websites rather than books because I can search with a few keywords and find answers quickly. However, I still use books for in-depth study when I need reliable, detailed information.

提案: 结构清晰，内容具体。可以略微优化语言使表达更自然，例如把条件句和计划更紧凑地连接。同时去掉冗余词语。

例: Yes, I'd like to build a website because I'm interested in web design and creative projects. At the moment I lack the skills and time, but if I had the opportunity I would take online coding courses and try building one with my parents.

提案: 回答要避免重复并修正语法错误（如“helps me a lot in planning trips and make better decisions”中的动词一致问题；句尾“where to go for”不完整）。给出一两项具体例子并说明具体帮助效果会更好。

例: I've learned practical travel tips from Redbook, such as sample itineraries and local restaurant recommendations. I also use it to research living abroad, which helps me plan trips and choose suitable destinations more confidently.

× I prefer visiting website that provide detailed travel itineraries and route suggestions because they prevent information clearly and are easy to follow.

✓ I prefer visiting websites that provide detailed travel itineraries and route suggestions because they present information clearly and are easy to follow.

原句中“website”應為複數“websites”，因為說話者表示偏好訪問多個網站；此外“prevent information clearly”用詞錯誤，應為“present information clearly（清楚地呈現資訊）”。建議：當講一般性習慣或偏好且涉及多個對象時使用複數，並注意動詞搭配（present information）。

× Not really, uh.

✓ (此處為口語填充語，可刪除或改為) Not really.

原句為口語填充語“Not really, uh.”中的“uh”為口頭禪，書面或正式回應中應刪除以顯得更清晰。此處不屬於主要語法錯誤列表，但為表達清晰可刪除。

× It's really designed well-rounded, which help me decide which places are really worth visiting.

✓ It's really well designed, which helps me decide which places are worth visiting.

原句“designed well-rounded”語序和形式不正確。應使用副詞+形容詞“well designed”（設計良好），且從句中主語為“which”（指整個網站），故動詞應為第三人稱單數“helps”。另外“really worth visiting”中“really”可省略以避免冗餘。建議：注意副詞位置（修飾形容詞時置於前）及主從句主語一致。

× I usually notice updates only if they improve functionality, otherwise I tend to ignore them and I'm not aware of adding significant differences.

✓ I usually notice updates only if they improve functionality; otherwise I tend to ignore them and I'm not aware of any significant changes.

原句“adding significant differences”用法不自然且語法錯誤。應改為“any significant changes”（任何顯著的變化）。同時調整標點和連接詞使句子更通順。建議：使用慣用搭配（significant changes）並注意連接句子的方法。

× Many young people use it to read product reviews, share lifestyle tips and discover trend items, so if both useful and entertaining.

✓ Many young people use it to read product reviews, share lifestyle tips and discover trending items, so it is both useful and entertaining.

原句中“so if both useful and entertaining”有拼寫/詞類錯誤，“if”應為“it”，且“trend items”應改為形容詞形式“trending items”。修正後主語與補語一致，語意清楚。建議：檢查代詞和連詞是否正確，用形容詞形式表達“流行的商品”。

× Now I prefer getting information from websites and two books because a website lets me use the search function with a few keywords so I can find information very quickly.

✓ Now I prefer getting information from websites rather than from books because a website lets me use the search function with a few keywords so I can find information very quickly.

原句“websites and two books”顯然為打字或表述錯誤（“two”應為“books”或“from books”），且語意想表達網站比書更便捷。改為“websites rather than from books”更符合對比語境。建議：確認數詞與名詞搭配是否合理，並使用恰當的連接表達對比。

× If I had the opportunity, I would learn coding through online courses and maybe make it with my parents.

✓ If I had the opportunity, I would learn coding through online courses and maybe make one with my parents.

原句中“make it with my parents”中的“it”指代不明，應改為“one”指代“a website”。建議：使用明確的代詞來指代前文名詞；此句為與現在事實相反的假設，用法正確但代詞需修正。

× I also collect information about starting or living abroad from the website, which helps me a lot in planning trips and make better decisions about where to go for.

✓ I also collect information about starting to live abroad or living abroad from the website, which helps me a lot in planning trips and making better decisions about where to go.

原句最後“where to go for”是不完整的短語，應去掉“for”。同時“helps me a lot in planning trips and make better decisions”中兩個動名詞並列時需保持形式一致，應改為“planning... and making...”。建議：檢查不完整的介詞短語並保持並列動名詞形式一致。