Websites— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi từ vựng/ngữ pháp. Nên mở đầu bằng một câu chủ đề trực tiếp, dùng linkers khi liệt kê và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể về hoạt động bạn làm trên từng trang. Sửa lỗi từ (ví dụ “Go” không rõ, “do exercise” → “do exercises”), và giới hạn độ dài không quá 4-5 câu.

例: I often visit educational websites to improve my English. For example, I use Google to search grammar explanations, BBC Learning English for vocabulary lessons, and YouTube for pronunciation videos. These sites help me practice through exercises and listening activities.

提案: Cần dùng từ chính xác và diễn đạt mạch lạc hơn. Nên có câu chủ đề rõ ràng, giải thích lý do cụ thể và đưa ví dụ minh họa liên quan. Chú ý sửa các từ sai (ví dụ “stars tutorial videos and letters” không rõ — có thể là “video tutorials and lectures”).

例: My favourite website is YouTube because it offers both learning materials and entertainment. For instance, I watch video tutorials to learn new skills and recorded lectures to review university topics, which helps me revise effectively.

提案: Câu trả lời thiếu chính xác về ngữ pháp và lặp từ. Nên nêu một câu chủ đề ngắn, giải thích các thay đổi cụ thể (giao diện, nội dung, tính năng) và dùng liên từ như “for example” để minh họa. Sửa thì động từ (“are update” → “are updated”), số nhiều/ít và từ vựng phù hợp.

例: Yes, the websites I use are updated regularly. For example, they add new articles, video tutorials and improved features like interactive quizzes, so I usually check them weekly for fresh content.

提案: Nhiều lỗi phát âm/viết và cấu trúc không chính xác. Cần câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sửa lỗi từ (e.g., “you eat”→“use”, “fart”→“fast”), và bổ sung các ví dụ khác loại website (mạng xã hội, tin tức). Giữ ngắn tối đa 4 câu.

例: Search engines like Google are very popular in my country. People use them to find information, read news, get directions and watch videos because they are fast and easy to use. Social media platforms and news websites are also widely visited.

提案: Cần sửa ngữ pháp và dùng từ chính xác (“forgetting”→“getting”, “reset recipe” unclear). Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề nêu ưu tiên, rồi nêu lý do cụ thể và ví dụ rõ ràng. Tránh lặp từ và giữ ngắn.

例: I prefer getting information from websites because they are convenient and offer real-time updates. For example, if I need a quick recipe or a tutorial, I can find step-by-step instructions and videos on my phone immediately.

提案: Ý tưởng rõ ràng nhưng có một vài lỗi từ và dư từ (ví dụ “potent potential”). Cần câu chủ đề ngắn, nêu mục đích cụ thể và cách bạn sẽ duy trì trang web. Sử dụng từ vựng chuyên ngành nhẹ nhàng như “portfolio” và “clients”.

例: Yes, I would like to have my own website to showcase my portfolio and build my personal brand. I would update it whenever I finish a new project so potential clients can easily see my latest work and contact me.

提案: Cần câu chủ đề rõ ràng và câu ví dụ mạch lạc hơn. Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng (“education signs” unclear → “educational sites”, “study strategies for exams”). Thêm chi tiết cụ thể về một kỹ năng hoặc chiến lược đã áp dụng và kết quả.

例: Websites help me learn practical skills and study strategies for exams. For example, cooking channels teach me quick recipes for busy weeknights, and educational sites offer study techniques like time management and note-taking that improved my exam preparation.

× I usually use Go, Google and other online websites to study English.

✓ I usually use Google and other websites to study English.

The phrase 'use Go, Google' is unclear and 'online websites' is redundant (website implies online). Remove 'Go' if it is mistaken and 'online' for conciseness. Use 'use Google' to mean 'visit Google'. Suggestion: say 'use Google' or 'visit websites such as Google'.

× They are very helpful because I can learn via vocabulary and grammar and do exercise on sites like BBC Learning English or YouTube.

✓ They are very helpful because I can learn vocabulary and grammar and do exercises on sites like BBC Learning English or YouTube.

Use noun forms: 'learn vocabulary and grammar' (not 'learn via vocabulary') and plural 'exercises'. Also 'via' is unnecessary. Suggestion: 'learn vocabulary and grammar and do exercises on sites...'.

× My favorite website is YouTube because it is both helpful and entertaining.

✓ My favorite website is YouTube because it is both helpful and entertaining.

No change needed; sentence is grammatically correct. (Included to show checked for plural/singular consistency.)

× For example, I watch stars tutorial videos and letters on YouTube to study new skills and revise what I learned at university.

✓ For example, I watch star tutorial videos and lectures on YouTube to learn new skills and revise what I learned at university.

'Stars tutorial videos' is unclear; likely 'star tutorial videos' or 'tutorial videos by stars'. 'Letters' is incorrect for 'lectures'. Also 'learn' fits better than 'study' in this context. Suggestion: be precise: 'tutorial videos and lectures'.

× Uh, yes, Those websites I visit are update regularly.

✓ Uh, yes. Those websites I visit are updated regularly.

Use passive past participle 'updated' after 'are' to indicate that sites receive updates. Also, capitalize/punctuation: 'Those' should not be capitalized after comma; use a period. Suggestion: 'are updated regularly'.

× They ask news, news, tutorial, tutorials and improved features to help user learn new skills.

✓ They provide news, tutorials, and improved features to help users learn new skills.

'Ask news' is wrong; correct verb is 'provide'. Avoid repetition 'news, news'. Use plural 'tutorials' and plural 'users'. Suggestion: 'provide news, tutorials, and improved features'.

× So I often check them weekly for the latest content.

✓ So I often check them weekly for the latest content.

Sentence is correct; 'check them weekly for' is appropriate. (Included as checked.)

× In my country Google is very popular.

✓ In my country, Google is very popular.

Add comma after introductory phrase; pronoun use fine. No pronoun error; included to show checked.

× Many people you eat to search for information, check the news, find directions and watch videos because it is fart and easy to use.

✓ Many people use it to search for information, check the news, find directions, and watch videos because it is fast and easy to use.

'you eat' is a mistaken phrase; correct verb is 'use it'. 'fart' is typo for 'fast'. Add commas and 'it' to refer to Google. Suggestion: 'Many people use it to... because it is fast and easy to use.'

× Absolutely, I will forgetting information from websites because they are convenient and provide real time updates so I can access to the latest news and tutorials on my phone anytime.

✓ Absolutely, I will get information from websites because they are convenient and provide real-time updates so I can access the latest news and tutorials on my phone anytime.

'Will forgetting' is wrong form; use 'will get' or 'will get/obtain'. Remove 'to' after 'access'. 'real time' should be hyphenated 'real-time'. Suggestion: 'I will get information... so I can access the latest...'.

× For example when I need a quick reset recipe or recipe and take.

✓ For example, when I need a quick recipe or instructions, I look them up online.

Original is fragmented and repetitive ('reset recipe or recipe and take'). Provide a clear structure: subject and verb, and clarify 'recipe or instructions'. Suggestion: 'I look them up online.'

× Absolutely. I would like to have my own website to showcase My Portfolio and build my personal brand.

✓ Absolutely. I would like to have my own website to showcase my portfolio and build my personal brand.

'My Portfolio' should be lowercase 'my portfolio' unless it's a title. Use consistent capitalization. No article change needed. Suggestion: use lowercase for common nouns.

× I could update it every time I finish a new project, so potent potential clients can see my latest work.

✓ I could update it every time I finish a new project, so potential clients can see my latest work.

'potent potential' contains redundant/incorrect word 'potent'. Use just 'potential'. Suggestion: proofread for extra words.

× I often use websites to learn practical skills and study strategies for exam.

✓ I often use websites to learn practical skills and study strategies for exams.

'for exam' should be plural 'for exams' or 'for an exam'. Use plural general reference 'exams'. Suggestion: 'for exams' or 'for exam preparation'.

× For example, cooking videos teach me quick recipes for busy weeknights and education signs explain studies the techniques umm.

✓ For example, cooking videos teach me quick recipes for busy weeknights, and educational videos explain study techniques.

'education signs' is incorrect; likely 'educational videos'. 'explain studies the techniques' is incorrect word order; use 'explain study techniques'. Remove filler 'umm'. Suggestion: 'educational videos explain study techniques'.