Websites— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答总体清晰直接，但有几处语言错误与表达不够地道。注意时态和主谓一致（例如“I don't visit websites very often”是可以的，但“It haven't been”应为“It hasn't been”在其他回答中也出现类似错误）。可以适当用连接词丰富细节，同时控制在最多5句内，避免冗长。建议练习用一到两句说明原因并举一两个具体例子来支持观点。

例: I don't visit websites very often; most of my online activities are done through mobile apps. However, I do use websites like Google or Wikipedia when I need to look up detailed information for work or study.

提案: 回答内容具体且相关，说明了网站名称及用途，表达有逻辑。但注意语法与流畅度（例如“seldom visit website”应为“seldom visit websites”或“I rarely visit websites”）。可以用连接词（e.g., 'for example'）增强连贯性，并尽量将句子合并使更自然。

例: I rarely visit websites, but my favourite is the web version of DeepSeek. For example, I use it to prepare teaching materials and sort documents, which saves me a lot of time.

提案: 答案表达意思清楚，但有语法错误和用词不当（“it haven't been”应为“there haven't been”或“it hasn't been”取决指代）。可用更具体例子说明哪些新功能出现，并用连接词（however, although）提高衔接。建议练习改写含有“changes”的常用句型。

例: There haven't been major changes for me. Although new features are added from time to time, I still use the sites in the same way and my overall experience remains unchanged.

提案: 回答具体且有例子，结构良好。可以稍微丰富词汇（e.g., 'streaming platforms'）并用一两个连接词使语流更自然。若能加入对比或原因（e.g., why people prefer them）会更好。

例: I would say streaming platforms like Bilibili, Tencent Video and Youku are the most popular. People enjoy watching films, TV series and short videos there because these sites offer a huge variety of content for relaxation.

提案: 答案观点明确但表达混乱且有错误（例如句子结构不完整，出现“such in bugs is rather slow”无意义片段）。需要重组句子，直接比较两者并给出具体理由。注意避免无关或错误短语，使用连接词（because, while）保证逻辑清晰。

例: I definitely prefer websites because they are more convenient and save time. While books can be more reliable, websites let me find targeted information instantly with a few clicks.

提案: 回答自然且有理由支持，结构清晰。可用更地道的表达替换“not on my plan”（e.g., 'it's not something I plan to do'). 若能补充一条可能会做的情形（例如如果有帮助会考虑）会使回答更丰富。

例: It sounds interesting, but I don't have a strong desire to run my own website. Running one requires time and technical skills that I currently lack, so it's not something I plan to do.

提案: 回答具体且连贯，有清晰的主题句和支持细节。句子数量合理，但可稍微合并避免冗余（例如将第二句和第三句合并），并用更正式的表达替换“knowledgeable friends”以显专业性。

例: I use AI chatbots for work and learn a lot from them, which enriches my knowledge and inspires fresh ideas for teaching. In that sense, these tools are valuable resources for my professional development.

× Honestly, I don't visit websites very often. Instead my online activities are mostly done by mobile applications.

✓ Honestly, I don't visit websites very often. Instead, my online activities are mostly done through mobile applications.

错误类型：现在时/介词使用（结合问题类型6和11，但遵循仅列出问题类型中的一项，选择“现在时问题”）。说明：原句中“by mobile applications”在语义上不太自然，通常用 through 或 via 表示“通过……（方式）”。建议：将介词改为 through 或 via，使表达更地道；此外在 Instead 之后加逗号以符合书面习惯。

× I only use websites when I need search engine to look up information.

✓ I only use websites when I need a search engine to look up information.

错误类型：现在分词/名词短语缺少冠词（归类为问题类型10）。说明：在英语中，单数可数名词前需有冠词或其他限定词。原句中“search engine”是可数名词，缺少不定冠词 a。建议：在“search engine”前加 a，变为“a search engine”。

× I seldom visit website, however I would pick the web version of DeepSeek as my favorite.

✓ I seldom visit websites; however, I would pick the web version of DeepSeek as my favorite.

错误类型：单复数问题（问题类型1）。说明：可数名词“website”在此处指一般情况，应使用复数“websites”。另外连接两个独立主句时应使用分号或句号，并在 however 后加逗号。建议：将 website 改为 websites，并调整标点为“; however,”。

× It's an AI chatbot tool and it helps me deal with some time consuming work such as preparing teaching materials and sorting out documents.

✓ It's an AI chatbot tool and it helps me deal with some time-consuming work such as preparing teaching materials and sorting out documents.

错误类型：现在时/形容词构词（选择问题类型6）。说明：“time consuming”作为复合形容词修饰名词时应连字符连接为“time-consuming”。建议：在复合形容词之间加连字符，写成“time-consuming”。

× Actually it haven't been huge changes for me.

✓ Actually there haven't been huge changes for me.

错误类型：现在时/There be 问题（结合问题类型3和6，但遵循仅列出问题类型中的一项，选择“现在时问题”）。说明：原句缺少形式主语 there，且动词与主语不一致。正确结构为 There haven't been + 名词短语。建议：在句首加 there 并使用 haven't been。

× New features are added from time to time, but the way I use it and my user experience stay the same.

✓ New features are added from time to time, but the way I use them and my user experience stays the same.

错误类型：主谓一致（问题类型27）。说明：短语“the way I use it”中代词 it 指代不明确，应该指代复数名词“features”，因此用 them；第二个并列主语“the way I use them and my user experience”视为并列结构时动词应与最近主语或整体一致，惯用表达为“... and my user experience stays the same.” 建议：将 it 改为 them，将 stay 改为 stays。

× I would say the most popular kind is the video website such as Bilibili, Tencent, and Youku.

✓ I would say the most popular kind is video websites such as Bilibili, Tencent, and Youku.

错误类型：单复数问题（问题类型1）。说明：“the video website”应表示一类网站，需用复数“video websites”或改为“the video website genre”。suggestion：将单数改为复数并去掉不必要的定冠词或改写为“video websites”。

× People love spending their free time watching films, TV series, and short videos.

✓ People love spending their free time watching films, TV series, and short videos.

错误类型：现在分词/结构正确（问题类型10）。说明：该句语法正确，使用现在分词短语“watching”恰当，无需修改。建议：保持原句即可。

× I definitely prefer websites that are more convenient and time saving such in bugs is rather slow, while websites can offer me targeted information right away with just a few clicks.

✓ I definitely prefer websites because they are more convenient and time-saving; for example, books are sometimes rather slow to search through, while websites can offer me targeted information right away with just a few clicks.

错误类型：句子结构错误（问题类型26）。说明：原句出现拼写错误“bugs”（应为 books）和逻辑连接不清，结构混乱。建议：重写句子，先说明偏好并用 because 连接原因，将“time saving”改为复合形容词“time-saving”，并用 for example 引出对比，将 books 正确拼写并调整为被动或不定式结构。

× Well, it sounds interesting, but I don't have strong desire to run my own website.

✓ Well, it sounds interesting, but I don't have a strong desire to run my own website.

错误类型：情态动词/冠词问题（选择问题类型4）。说明：短语“strong desire”前需加不定冠词 a。建议：在 desire 前加 a，形成“a strong desire”。

× I think operating a website requires plenty of time and technical skills, which I don't really have at the moment, so it's not on my plan.

✓ I think operating a website requires plenty of time and technical skills, which I don't really have at the moment, so it's not in my plans.

错误类型：现在时/习惯表达（选择问题类型6）。说明：“not on my plan”不是地道表达，常用短语是 “not in my plans” 或 “not part of my plans”。建议：将短语改为“not in my plans”。

× As I just mentioned, I use AI chatbot websites for work, so I pick up plenty of knowledge while chatting with AI tools.

✓ As I just mentioned, I use AI chatbot websites for work, so I pick up plenty of knowledge while chatting with AI tools.

错误类型：现在时问题（问题类型6）。说明：该句语法正确，时态使用恰当，无需修改。建议：保持原句。

× This enriches my knowledge and broadens my horizons.

✓ This enriches my knowledge and broadens my horizons.

错误类型：形容词/副词使用（问题类型13）。说明：句子本身正确，词语搭配恰当，无需修改。建议：保持原句。

× Also, it inspires me to come up with more fresh ideas for teaching.

✓ Also, it inspires me to come up with fresher ideas for teaching.

错误类型：形容词使用（问题类型13）。说明：“more fresh”为冗余比较，形容词 fresh 的比较级为 fresher，通常不与 more 连用。建议：将“more fresh”改为“fresher”。

× I regard AI tools as my knowledgeable friends.

✓ I regard AI tools as my knowledgeable friends.

错误类型：代词/指代使用（问题类型12）。说明：该句语法和指代正确，无需修改。建议：保持原句。