Websites— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答は伝わりますが、表現の明確さ・文法、語彙の選択、接続詞の使用を改善するとより自然に聞こえます。例えば主語・動詞の一致（"user like"→"user-friendly"）や理由を示す接続語（becauseの代わりにalsoやfor exampleなど）を使い、具体例（どのような情報やツールを使うか）を加えると良いです。語数は3〜5文にまとめて簡潔に。

例: I often use Google because, as a researcher, I need to find up-to-date articles and datasets. In particular, I frequently use Google Scholar and Google Dataset Search to locate scientific papers and data. These tools are very convenient and save me a lot of time when starting new projects.

提案: 内容が重複して冗長になっています。同じ理由を繰り返す代わりに、1つか2つの具体的な機能（例：Google Scholar、news alerts）を挙げ、接続詞で流れを作りましょう。文法（単数・複数の一致）を正すことも重要です。

例: My favourite website is Google because it provides many research tools for academics. For example, I use Google Scholar to find peer-reviewed articles and Google Alerts to keep track of new publications. These features let me gather relevant information quickly and efficiently.

提案: 文法と語彙の誤りが目立ちます（例："the recently a Google adapts AI support"→"recently Google has introduced AI features"、"air support"→"AI support"）。また詳しい変化の説明（どのように便利か、具体的な機能）を加えることで説得力が増します。接続語で説明をつなげてください。

例: Yes. Recently Google has introduced AI-powered search features that summarise web pages and suggest related topics. As a result, I can find key information faster and decide which articles to read in depth. This change has improved my research efficiency.

提案: 回答が個人的視点に偏っており一般化の根拠が弱いです。国全体の人気サイトを挙げるならSNSやニュースサイトなど複数の例を示し、理由や具体的な利用状況を述べると良いです。完結な文でつなげ、句読点や名詞の複数形に注意してください。

例: In Australia, search engines like Google are very popular, but social media platforms such as Facebook and Instagram are also widely used. People use Google for information searches, while Facebook is common for news and local community groups. These platforms are popular because they are easy to access and link well with other apps.

提案: 回答がありません。教師の質問には必ず直接答えを述べ、その後に理由や具体例を加えてください。まずは明確なトピックセンテンス（I prefer websites/books）を言い、その後で理由と1つ具体例を述べ、接続語でつなぎます。英語では2〜4文で簡潔に答えましょう。

例: I prefer getting information from websites because they provide the most up-to-date resources. For example, I can access recent studies and online articles immediately, which is useful for my research. However, for in-depth background reading I still consult books.

提案: 表現が不明瞭で文法的な誤りがあります（例："are we all my medical clinic?"）。まず明確に肯定を示し、その後に将来の計画を簡潔に説明してください。将来の目的やサイトで何を紹介するか具体的に述べると良いです。

例: Yes. I don't need a website right now, but I plan to create one for my future medical clinic. The site would introduce our services, allow patients to book appointments online, and provide health information for the local community.

提案: 主旨は伝わりますが、冗長な表現と語順の問題があります（"in the Facebook"→"on Facebook"）。より具体的にどのような情報を得たか（学習リソース、学会情報、コミュニティ）や例を挙げると説得力が増します。接続詞で文を整理してください。

例: I have learned many practical tips and study resources from Facebook groups related to my field. For instance, colleagues often share articles, webinar announcements, and advice via Messenger, which helps me stay informed and connected. This support has been useful for both my research and daily work.

× It's Google because as a researcher I have to find new information about my research. Google is very convenient and user like website for me.

✓ I use Google because, as a researcher, I have to find new information for my research. Google is very convenient and user-friendly for me.

The phrase 'user like website' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'user-friendly' to describe something that is easy to use. Also 'It's Google' is unnatural in this context; use 'I use Google' to answer the question about what websites you visit. Add commas around the introductory phrase 'as a researcher' and use 'for my research' rather than 'about my research' for natural English.

× My favorite website is Google because I am a researcher and I need to get a lot of information through website.

✓ My favorite website is Google because I am a researcher and I need to get a lot of information through websites.

The singular 'website' is inconsistent with 'a lot of information' and general usage; use the plural 'websites' to indicate information comes from various web sources. Also consider 'from websites' or 'online' as alternatives for more natural phrasing.

× I believe Google is very convenient and user friendly websites for us.

✓ I believe Google is very convenient and user-friendly for us.

There is a mismatch between 'Google' (singular) and 'websites' (plural). Use 'user-friendly' hyphenated as an adjective and match singular noun: 'Google is ... user-friendly'. Also avoid adding 'websites' after 'Google' in this sentence.

× Through Google we can gather information very quickly.

✓ Through Google, we can gather information very quickly.

This sentence is grammatically fine but benefits from a comma after the introductory phrase 'Through Google' to improve clarity and natural rhythm.

× Yes, my favorite website is Google and the recently a Google adapts AI support when we are searching something.

✓ Yes, my favorite website is Google, and recently Google has added AI support for searches.

The original has incorrect article usage ('the recently a Google') and awkward verb choice 'adapts'. Use 'recently' before the verb and 'has added' to describe a recent change. 'When we are searching something' is unnatural; use 'for searches' or 'when we search'.

× I think this air support is very convenient.

✓ I think this AI support is very convenient.

'air' is a misspelling of the abbreviation 'AI' (artificial intelligence). Use 'AI' and ensure it's clear it's an initialism; 'support' is fine.

× Without subscription to Gemini we can effectively gather important information.

✓ Without a subscription to Gemini, we can still effectively gather important information.

Add the article 'a' before 'subscription' and include 'still' to emphasize ability despite not subscribing. Commas improve readability.

× I think Google is the most popular website in Australia.

✓ I think Google is the most popular website in Australia.

This sentence is correct; it uses the definite article 'the' appropriately to indicate Google is the top site. No change needed other than optional punctuation.

× Many people use it for gathering information and I think Google has a lot of useful apps like Gemini, Google Documents, Google Spreadsheet and they are connected to each other.

✓ Many people use it to gather information, and I think Google has many useful apps like Gemini, Google Docs, and Google Sheets, which are connected to each other.

Use 'to gather' instead of 'for gathering' for more natural infinitive form. Use consistent app names ('Google Docs', 'Google Sheets') and 'many' instead of 'a lot of' in formal speech. Combine clauses with commas and a relative clause 'which are connected' for clarity.

× Very convenient.

✓ They are very convenient.

'Very convenient' is a sentence fragment lacking a subject and verb. Add a subject ('They') to form a complete sentence referring to the apps or services.

× Yes, uh, but so far I don't need it. But in the future are we all my medical clinic? So in the future I will have my own website to introduce my small clinic.

✓ Yes, I don't need one at the moment, but in the future, when I open my medical clinic, I will have my own website to introduce my small clinic.

Original contains disfluent filler words and a garbled phrase 'are we all my medical clinic'. Replace with 'when I open my medical clinic' to express future plan. Use 'one' to refer to 'a website' and remove repeated 'But' to avoid redundancy.

× Uh, through Facebook I can get useful information and it's very supportive for me.

✓ Through Facebook, I can get useful information, and it's very helpful to me.

'Supportive' is typically used for people; for services, use 'helpful'. Add commas to separate clauses. Sentence otherwise acceptable.

× And in the Facebook I can exchange my opinion using Messenger apps.

✓ And on Facebook I can exchange my opinions using the Messenger app.

Do not use the definite article 'the' with 'Facebook'; say 'on Facebook'. Use plural 'opinions' if multiple, and 'the Messenger app' singular or 'Messenger apps' if plural, but 'the Messenger app' is most natural.

× So they are overall Facebook is very convenient for me.

✓ Overall, Facebook is very convenient for me.

The original mixes subjects ('they are' and 'Facebook') creating an ungrammatical sentence. Simplify to 'Overall, Facebook is very convenient for me.'