Websites— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Отвечайте более прямо и естественно; избегайте лишних слов и пауз. Начните с чёткой темы, затем добавьте подробность и пример. Используйте связки (for example, because) и сокращайте повторения (например, не говорите "every time" и "every time"). Также постарайтесь использовать более точную лексику, например "fashion blogs" или "style websites".

例: I don't spend much time online, but when I do I mainly visit fashion websites. For example, I often read fashion blogs and trend reports to see new styles and outfit ideas.

提案: Дайте прямой ответ в начале, затем поясните причину конкретно. Избегайте неуверенных фраз («I suppose», «vague») и грамматических ошибок (например, «enjoy to follow» → «enjoy following»). Будьте короче и логичнее, используйте связки (because, so) и конкретику о сайте.

例: My favourite website is a fashion blog called Vogue because it helps me keep up with the latest trends and offers outfit ideas I can try every day.

提案: Отвечайте конкретно и приводите примеры изменений. Используйте связки (for example, nowadays, because) и более точные слова (user-friendly, layout, mobile-friendly). Избегайте общих слов и повторений. Можно упомянуть конкретную функциональность.

例: Yes, websites have become much more user-friendly. For example, many sites now have simpler layouts and mobile-friendly designs, which makes it easier to browse and find articles or videos quickly.

提案: Сократите паузы и междометия (umm, uh). Дайте прямой ответ и добавьте причину и пример. Используйте точные формулировки (short videos, social media platforms) и связки (especially, because, for example).

例: Social media platforms like Instagram and TikTok are very popular, especially among teenagers, because they offer short, entertaining videos and trends that are easy to watch after school.

提案: Начните с чёткого утверждения, затем объясните причину и добавьте пример. Уберите повторы и паузы. Можно отметить ситуации, когда книга лучше, чтобы показать сбалансированность. Используйте слова like "convenient", "quick", "reliable" и приводите пример сайта.

例: I prefer getting information from websites because it's quick and convenient. For example, I can use reliable sites like educational portals or online encyclopedias to find answers in minutes, whereas books take longer to search.

提案: Дайте прямой, уверенный ответ и объясните причину конкретно. Избегайте фраз типа «I don't really consider that it is a good question». Сформулируйте идеи чётко: возможно ли в будущем, какие темы могли бы быть интересны. Это покажет гибкость мышления.

例: No, I wouldn't like to have my own website at the moment because I don't have a clear idea of what content I would publish. Maybe in the future I might start a blog about fashion if I decide to share outfit tips.

提案: Отвечайте последовательно: сначала конкретный пример полезного знания, затем объяснение. Избегайте обрывистых предложений и повторов. Используйте правильную формулировку (for example, privacy, online security) и свяжите идею с практическим советом.

例: Websites have taught me many practical things, especially about online safety. For example, I've learned not to share personal details on social media and to use strong passwords to protect my accounts.

× I visit different websites hardly ever.

✓ I hardly ever visit different websites.

The adverb 'hardly ever' should be placed before the main verb. The original word order sounds unnatural in English. Move 'hardly ever' before 'visit' to correctly quantify frequency.

× But the most enjoyable for me are those websites with fashion and trends.

✓ But the most enjoyable for me are those websites about fashion and trends.

The preposition 'with' is incorrect for describing content; 'about' is the correct preposition. This change fixes meaning rather than agreement, but it also preserves plural agreement 'websites ... are'.

× Well, I have never considered this question but I suppose that it is vague because I enjoy to follow the fashion and I want to keep up with the with the new trends to be in a fashion like everyday.

✓ Well, I have never considered this question, but I suppose it is difficult to answer because I enjoy following fashion and I want to keep up with new trends to be fashionable every day.

Use 'following' (verb + -ing) instead of 'to follow' after 'enjoy' (Grammar ID 8). Remove duplicate 'the'. Use 'fashionable' as the adjective, not the noun phrase 'in a fashion like'. Also simplify 'vague' to 'difficult to answer' for clarity. Correct word forms and order improve grammar and meaning.

× because I enjoy to follow the fashion

✓ because I enjoy following fashion

After the verb 'enjoy', use the -ing form (gerund), not the infinitive 'to follow'. Also omit the article before 'fashion' when speaking generally.

× I want to keep up with the with the new trends

✓ I want to keep up with the new trends

There is a duplicated 'with the'. Remove the duplicate and keep the correct preposition 'with' to indicate staying informed.

× to be in a fashion like everyday

✓ to be fashionable every day

Use the adjective 'fashionable' to describe a person or style, and 'every day' (two words) as an adverbial phrase meaning 'each day'. The original phrase was ungrammatical.

× Well, I suppose that websites are changing every day and they are becoming more convenient for people to use.

✓ Well, I suppose that websites change every day and are becoming more convenient for people to use.

Both present simple ('change') and present continuous ('are becoming') are acceptable; using present simple for habitual change sounds more natural. This corrects tense consistency and improves style.

× my favorite websites are now more user friendly and it's really comfortable to browse them and find out something interesting.

✓ My favorite websites are now more user-friendly and it's very comfortable to browse them and find something interesting.

Use hyphenated adjective 'user-friendly'. 'Really comfortable' is acceptable but 'very comfortable' is more natural here. Use 'find' (not 'find out') for discovering content; 'find out' is used for learning facts.

× such websites as Instagram or Tiktok are popular in my country

✓ websites such as Instagram or TikTok are popular in my country

Word order 'websites such as' is more natural than 'such websites as'. Also correct capitalization of 'TikTok'.

× they provide uh, funny and easy going videos

✓ they provide funny, easy-going videos

Use a comma between adjectives and hyphenate the compound adjective 'easy-going'. Remove filler 'uh'.

× help us to relax from our daily routine

✓ help us relax from our daily routine

After 'help' the infinitive without 'to' or the base verb is natural: 'help us relax'. Also 'from our daily routine' is acceptable, though 'from our daily routines' (plural) could also be used.

× these days I definitely prefer finding out something new, uh, in the in on the Internet because it's really convenient

✓ these days I definitely prefer finding out something new on the Internet because it's really convenient

Remove duplicated prepositions 'in the in on the'. Use 'on the Internet' which is the standard prepositional phrase. Keep gerund 'finding' after 'prefer'.

× I can ask whatever I want to know and get the appropriate information in a short amount of time.

✓ I can ask whatever I want to know and get the appropriate information in a short time.

'In a short amount of time' is wordy; 'in a short time' or 'in a short period' is more natural. Both are acceptable, but simplification improves fluency.

× Well, I have never thought about this question and I think I don't really need my own website because I don't know what to put on and I don't really consider that it is a good question for me.

✓ Well, I have never thought about having my own website and I don't think I really need one because I don't know what to put on it and I don't consider it necessary for me.

Use 'thought about having' to talk about considering owning something. Replace 'what to put on' with 'what to put on it' to specify the website. Simplify 'I don't really consider that it is a good question for me' to 'I don't consider it necessary for me' for clarity and correctness.

× Well, I find out something new from my studies or daily life, uh, every day.

✓ Well, I find something new in my studies or daily life every day.

Use 'find' rather than 'find out' when encountering new experiences; 'find out' is used for discovering specific facts. Remove filler 'uh' and place 'every day' at the end.

× But the most useful thing was not to share all the information about yourself on the Internet

✓ But the most useful thing I learned was not to share all information about yourself on the Internet

Add 'I learned' to clarify the sentence and improve structure. Omit 'the' before 'information' when speaking generally. Maintain correct article use.

× because there are a lot of hackers and you can be. Hacked.

✓ because there are a lot of hackers and you can be hacked.

Remove the incorrect period and split; combine into one sentence 'you can be hacked'. Corrects sentence fragment and punctuation.