Websites— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Reduce fillers and small hesitations, group similar sites clearly, use linking words and be more specific. Keep answer within 3–4 concise sentences: state types, give one or two examples, and explain briefly why you visit them.

例: I often visit educational, entertainment and shopping websites. For example, I use YouTube and music platforms for entertainment and educational sites for studying. I also shop on Amazon and Myntra because they are convenient and save time.

提案: Avoid pauses and unnecessary filler words. Provide one or two specific reasons or an example of what you learn. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' to make it coherent.

例: My favourite website is YouTube because it offers both educational and entertainment videos. For example, I watch tutorial videos that help me learn new skills quickly and the interface is very user-friendly.

提案: Be more specific about the changes and give an example of a new feature. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repeated hesitations.

例: Yes, I have noticed changes such as improved design, faster loading times and new features. For example, some sites now have dark mode and personalized recommendations, which make them more convenient and easier to use.

提案: Use plural forms and smoother phrasing, and give one short reason why each type is popular. Keep it concise and avoid redundancy.

例: Educational, shopping and social media websites are very popular. For instance, people use YouTube for learning, Amazon for shopping and Instagram for social interaction because these sites are convenient and widely accessible.

提案: Eliminate hesitation, state your preference clearly and add a specific reason or example to support it. Use a linking word like 'because' and keep it to two sentences.

例: I prefer getting information from websites because they are faster and more convenient. For example, I can search for up-to-date articles and videos instantly instead of searching through books.

提案: Respond confidently and expand slightly: say why you want one and what purpose it would serve. Use one linking phrase and avoid vague timing words like 'in future' without detail.

例: I don't have a website now, but I plan to create one to showcase my projects and blog about my studies. I will start learning web development courses next year to build it.

提案: Clarify the meaning (the phrase 'practicing my eyes' is unclear) and give a specific example of what you've learned and how it helps. Use clear grammar and a coherent structure: topic sentence + supporting detail.

例: Yes. Websites have helped me prepare for exams by providing practice tests and tutorial videos. For example, I used an online platform with timed mock exams and step-by-step solutions, which improved my speed and confidence.

× Well, I usually visit uh educational entertainment and shopping website in my daily life, uh, such as YouTube and uh, uh, music platforms for entertainment, uh, educational websites for study purpose and Amazon and Myntra for online shopping. I find them both useful and time saving.

✓ Well, I usually visit educational, entertainment, and shopping websites in my daily life, such as YouTube and music platforms for entertainment, educational websites for study purposes, and Amazon and Myntra for online shopping. I find them all useful and time-saving.

The noun 'website' should be plural because multiple types and examples are mentioned (singular/plural agreement). 'Study purpose' should be 'study purposes' to match common usage. 'Both' implies two items; here more than two are listed, so 'all' is correct. 'Time saving' as a compound adjective before a noun should be hyphenated as 'time-saving' or used adverbially as 'it saves time'.

× My favorite website is definitely YouTube, uh, because I uh, can watch educational as well as, uh, uh, entertainment videos there. Moreover, it is completely user friendly and it helps me to learn, uh, new things in an interesting way.

✓ My favorite website is definitely YouTube because I can watch educational as well as entertainment videos there. Moreover, it is completely user-friendly and it helps me learn new things in an interesting way.

Remove filler hesitations. 'User friendly' should be hyphenated as 'user-friendly' when used as an adjective. 'Helps me to learn' is acceptable but more natural as 'helps me learn' (verb complement). Avoid extra commas.

× Yes, certainly I have noticed several changes, uh, in the website I visit regularly, such as, uh, improved designs, uh, faster services and newly added features. I believe these updates make them uh, more user friendly and convenient for people.

✓ Yes, certainly I have noticed several changes in the websites I visit regularly, such as improved designs, faster services, and newly added features. I believe these updates make them more user-friendly and convenient for people.

'The website I visit' should be plural 'websites' to match 'several changes' across multiple sites. Hyphenate 'user-friendly'. Also remove unnecessary commas and hesitations.

× In my country, educational shopping and social media website are extremely popular among people of any age groups. For instance, many individuals regularly use YouTube, Google, Amazon, and Instagram for study, entertainment, shopping, and communication purposes.

✓ In my country, educational, shopping, and social media websites are extremely popular among people of all age groups. For instance, many individuals regularly use YouTube, Google, Amazon, and Instagram for study, entertainment, shopping, and communication purposes.

Use plural 'websites' because multiple categories are listed. Use commas to separate items. 'Any age groups' is unnatural; 'all age groups' is the correct collocation.

× Umm, I uh, I would prefer getting information from website because uh, it's fast and uh, more convenient than books.

✓ I would prefer getting information from websites because it's faster and more convenient than books.

Use plural 'websites' when speaking generally. Use comparative 'faster' (not 'fast') to compare to books. Remove filler words. Ensure verb tense fits preference: present simple with 'would prefer' is fine.

× Well, I do not have now, but I will learn to make my own website in future.

✓ I do not have one now, but I will learn to make my own website in the future.

Add the pronoun 'one' after 'have' to clarify 'I do not have one'. Include the article 'the' before 'future' to form the common expression 'in the future'. The sentence structure needed these small additions for clarity.

× Yes, definitely. Uh, for now, uh, I'm uh. I'm practicing my eyes so there are several websites that helps me to how to crack the exam very easily.

✓ Yes, definitely. For now, I'm practicing with exercises, and there are several websites that help me learn how to crack the exam easily.

Original sentence contains unclear phrase 'practicing my eyes' which is unnatural; clarified to 'practicing with exercises' (adjust to intended meaning). 'Websites that helps' should be 'websites that help' (subject-verb agreement). 'Helps me to how to crack' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'help me learn how to crack'. Removed unnecessary fillers and 'very' which is vague; 'easily' suffices.