Websites— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the response more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, then give 1–2 specific reasons using linking words. Correct grammar (verb forms, articles, prepositions) and avoid redundancy.

例: I often visit educational websites and online shopping sites. Since I live in a semi-rural area, it’s difficult to go to the market or take my children to a tutor, so I use these sites for buying essentials and finding online lessons.

提案: Begin with a direct statement naming the website, then give two clear, specific reasons with linking words. Use correct collocations (e.g., “cutting-edge technology,” “references,” “prestigious universities”) and avoid repeating similar points.

例: My favourite website is Sports Dietitian of India because it offers cutting-edge features: each recipe includes step-by-step videos and links to academic references. In addition, many articles include reviews or endorsements from prestigious universities, which makes the content reliable.

提案: Clarify whether you mean websites in general or a specific site. Use present perfect or present simple correctly, and explain one clear change with an example. Avoid vague claims like "understand facial expression" without context.

例: Yes, many websites I use have changed a lot recently. For example, one site now includes an AI assistant that answers queries and suggests resources based on my profile; it also remembers my past searches, which saves time when I return.

提案: Start with a clear topic sentence, then use linking words (e.g., "since", "as a result") to explain reasons and provide a specific example. Fix grammar (plural forms, word order).

例: Educational websites and e-commerce platforms are very popular in my country. Since COVID-19, people have preferred online services for safety and convenience, so demand for e-learning platforms and online marketplaces has increased significantly.

提案: Make a clear comparison and use correct sentence structure. State a direct preference, give specific reasons and an example, and avoid repetition. Use correct grammar (articles, verb forms, plurals).

例: I use both, but I prefer websites for general or up-to-date information because they provide quick summaries and the latest research. However, when I need in-depth study on a specific topic, I turn to books or academic journals for more detail.

提案: Answer directly and briefly: confirm ownership, describe purpose and specific benefits with linking words. Correct phrasing (e.g., "I have managed to create two websites"). Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

例: Yes, I already created two websites—one for my clinic and one for my organization. I post daily content like health tips and appointment information, which has helped attract more patients and improve my professional visibility.

提案: Provide a clear topic sentence about a specific online course or resource, then give concise details: what you learned, the result, and how you continue to use websites. Fix unclear words ("acuity") and finish the final thought.

例: I completed an online FODMAP course and learned how to manage dietary triggers, which helped me score highly on the exam and earn a certificate. Since then, I regularly read research articles and subscribe to nutrition newsletters to stay updated.

× I always will visit on website which are providing education as well as online shopping facilities.

✓ I always visit websites that provide educational resources as well as online shopping facilities.

Incorrect use of future modal 'will' with 'always' (modal verb usage) and wrong preposition 'on' and plural agreement. Use simple present 'visit' for habitual action and plural 'websites'. Use 'that provide' for relative clause.

× Because I am living in semi rural area and it is really hard to go into the market and I couldn't take my children to special tutor.

✓ Because I live in a semi-rural area and it is really hard to go to the market, and I cannot take my children to a special tutor.

Present progressive 'am living' is unnecessary for a general state; use simple present 'live'. Missing article 'a' before 'semi-rural area' and 'special tutor'. Use 'cannot' instead of past 'couldn't' when stating a current inability.

× So I am exploring these kind of website that helps me to get.

✓ So I am exploring these kinds of websites that help me learn.

Incorrect quantifier and number agreement: 'these kind of website' should be 'these kinds of websites' or 'this kind of website'. Verb 'helps' should be 'help' to agree with plural 'websites'. 'To get' is vague; use 'learn' or 'access information'.

× My favorite website is Sports Dietation of India.

✓ My favorite website is Sports Dietation of India.

Proper noun may be correct; no grammatical adjective/adverb error detected. (If name is intended 'Sports Dietetics of India', correct the proper noun.)

× It has a cutting edge technology because whether I search a recipe or any content it provides me all the information with video as well as many reference of books.

✓ It has cutting-edge technology because whether I search for a recipe or other content, it provides all the information with videos as well as many book references.

Issues: missing hyphen in 'cutting-edge' treated as adjective, missing preposition 'for' after 'search', misuse of 'whether' without 'or not' is awkward but acceptable; improved for clarity. Plural forms 'videos' and 'book references' needed. 'Provides me all the information' -> 'provides all the information' or 'provides me with all the information'.

× Moreover, reviews are given by very prestigious universities as well.

✓ Moreover, reviews are also provided by very prestigious universities.

Word order and redundancy: 'as well' and 'moreover' both used; simplified to 'also'. Use passive 'are provided' which is correct; original 'are given by very prestigious universities as well' is acceptable but word order improved for naturalness.

× Yes, my website has changed dramatically.

✓ Yes, my website has changed dramatically.

Sentence is correct; 'has changed' uses present perfect appropriately to describe a recent change, so no correction needed.

× It is provided with AI assistant tool and moreover it can also understand the question of person from its facial expression and it has a good sensory system.

✓ It now includes an AI assistant tool, and it can even understand a person's question from their facial expression because it has a good sensory system.

Original sentence had awkward passive 'is provided with' and unclear 'question of person'. Reworded for clarity and natural subject pronoun usage. Adjusted tense and structure for fluency.

× Moreover, it remember all the information and data.

✓ Moreover, it remembers all the information and data.

Subject-verb agreement error: third person singular 'it' requires 'remembers' (verb form). This falls under pronoun/verb agreement.

× In my country, educational website and e-commerce sites have become specially popular.

✓ In my country, educational websites and e-commerce sites have become especially popular.

Pluralization: 'educational website' should be plural 'educational websites'. 'Specially' is incorrect adverb here; use 'especially'.

× After COVID, people shifted toward online services for convenience and safety.

✓ After COVID, people have shifted toward online services for convenience and safety.

Use present perfect 'have shifted' to indicate a change that started in the past and continues to the present. 'After COVID' could be 'after the COVID-19 pandemic'.

× So they there has been a big increase in demand of e-learning platform and online marketplace.

✓ So there has been a big increase in demand for e-learning platforms and online marketplaces.

Remove extraneous 'they'. Use 'demand for' not 'demand of'. Pluralize 'platform' and 'marketplace' to match general demand.

× I prefer getting information from both platform because websites not only providing provides me all the latest information but also scheme of the knowledge that I am looking for.

✓ I prefer getting information from both platforms because websites not only provide me with all the latest information but also the specific knowledge I am looking for.

'Both platform' should be 'both platforms'. Verb form: 'providing provides' is incorrect; use 'provide'. Include preposition 'with' after 'provide'. 'Scheme of the knowledge' is awkward; use 'specific knowledge' or 'structure of knowledge'.

× So I need not to go through countless books wherever.

✓ So I do not need to go through countless books anymore.

Use correct negative structure 'do not need to' not 'need not to'. 'Wherever' is inappropriate; use 'anymore' or 'in person'.

× When I have to read a specially about one particular topic then I prefer.

✓ When I have to read specifically about one particular topic, I prefer books.

Sentence incomplete and awkward 'read a specially'. Add object 'books' or 'websites' to complete thought and use 'specifically'.

× Definitely, I already managed to website one for my clinic and one for my organization.

✓ Definitely, I already managed to create a website for my clinic and one for my organization.

Incorrect verb and word order: 'managed to website one' is incorrect. Use 'managed to create' or 'set up a website'.

× I post content on both everyday such as health tips and appointment information.

✓ I post content on both every day, such as health tips and appointment information.

Use 'every day' as two words for frequency. Comma before example list improves readability. Verb tense 'post' is fine.

× So they have helped me to attract a large customer base and improve my professional activities.

✓ So they have helped me attract a large customer base and improve my professional activities.

Remove unnecessary 'to' after 'helped me' for natural English: 'helped me attract' is preferred. Pronoun usage otherwise fine.

× I have learned all the content of a FODMAP course and I scored very well in the exam.

✓ I learned all the content of a FODMAP course and scored very well on the exam.

Mixing present perfect and simple past is acceptable but inconsistent; use simple past 'learned' and 'scored' for a completed past action. Use 'on the exam' rather than 'in the exam'.

× I also got my certificate in the following week.

✓ I also received my certificate the following week.

Use 'received' instead of informal 'got'. Use 'the following week' without 'in'.

× This is the recent acuity I have done with my website and moreover, I keep myself updated regarding the latest research on food and nutrition through the.

✓ This is the most recent course I have completed on my website, and I also keep myself updated regarding the latest research on food and nutrition through it.

'Acuity' is incorrect word choice; likely 'activity' or 'course'. 'I have done with my website' awkward; use 'completed on my website'. Sentence ended abruptly 'through the.' Add 'it' to refer to website. Reword for clarity.