Websites— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Speak more fluently and organize your answer: start with a clear topic sentence, then give two or three specific types of websites with brief reasons. Avoid fillers (uh, um) and grammatical errors (plural/singular, verb forms). Use linking words like 'also' and 'for example' to connect ideas. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

例: I often visit three kinds of websites. First, I use music and entertainment sites to relax after work. I also use social media to keep in touch with friends living abroad. Finally, I visit English-learning sites to improve my vocabulary and practice listening.

提案: Be concise and correct vocabulary and grammar. Begin with a clear statement of your favourite site, then provide specific reasons and one example of a feature you use. Avoid unclear phrases and pronunciation errors in speech by practising key words before the test.

例: My favourite website is Facebook because it helps me keep in touch with family and friends in Vietnam. For example, I often use Messenger to send photos and make video calls when I have free time.

提案: Give a clear topic sentence about changes, then explain specific changes with examples (e.g., stories, reels, faster loading). Use linking words like 'for example' and avoid repetition. Also correct tense and word choice: 'have become' not 'are now become'. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

例: Yes. In recent years these websites have become more interactive and visually appealing. For example, Instagram introduced short videos and stories, and Facebook's interface loads faster and encourages more user interaction.

提案: Make a clearer classification and use specific examples. Start with a topic sentence naming the most popular categories, then give examples and reasons for each category. Avoid hesitations and fragmented sentences. Use linking words like 'for example' and 'also'.

例: Popular websites in my country fall into three categories: educational sites, entertainment sites, and news sites. For example, many people use online courses to learn skills, Facebook and Instagram for socialising, and news websites to follow current events.

提案: Answer directly and give two clear reasons with linking phrases. Correct grammar (e.g., 'websites' plural agreement, 'provide' -> 'provide', 'books' plural). Avoid vague or confused phrases. Mention one drawback of websites to show balance if possible.

例: I prefer getting information from websites because they provide real-time updates and are easy to access on my phone. However, books are better for in-depth study, so I use books when I need detailed, reliable information.

提案: Be specific about the website's purpose and features. Start with a clear statement, then list 2–3 things you would post or offer, using correct vocabulary ('tips' not 'teeth'). Keep sentences concise and use linking words like 'for example' or 'and'.

例: Yes. I would create a personal website to share life with my dog. For example, I would post photos and short videos of our daily routine, write articles with training tips, and build a small community for other dog owners.

提案: Provide a clear topic sentence, then give specific, correctly-worded examples of skills or knowledge you gained. Use linking words (for example, such as) and avoid confusing phrases like 'self discrepancies'. Aim for 2–3 concise sentences and correct grammar.

例: Websites have taught me study and life skills. For example, I learned time-management strategies such as focusing on one task at a time and using timers to avoid multitasking, which has reduced my anxiety and increased my productivity.

× I often visit entertainment website just to listen to music and unwind after a long day.

✓ I often visit entertainment websites just to listen to music and unwind after a long day.

The noun 'website' refers to a general category and the sentence describes repeated actions, so the plural 'websites' is required. Use the plural to agree with 'often' and the general meaning.' '

× I also visit uh, made social media, which helped me to stay in touch with oversea friends and I just recently I also visit the sites for learning English, which can, uh, improves my vocabulary and.

✓ I also use social media, which helps me stay in touch with overseas friends, and recently I have also visited sites for learning English, which help improve my vocabulary.

Multiple issues: 'made social media' is incorrect word choice; 'helped' should be present 'helps' for habitual action; 'oversea' should be 'overseas'; 'I just recently I also visit' is ungrammatical — use 'recently I have also visited'; 'improves' should be base form 'help improve' after which-clause. Sentence structure improved for clarity.' '

× Whilst I mostly use Facebook, it's helped me to keep in touch with my family and friends in Vietnam I haven't seen for a long time.

✓ Although I mostly use Facebook, it has helped me keep in touch with family and friends in Vietnam whom I haven't seen for a long time.

Use 'although' instead of 'whilst' for naturalness (both possible but 'although' clearer). 'it's helped' expanded to 'it has helped' is fine; 'my family and friends in Vietnam I haven't seen' needs a relative pronoun 'whom' to link the clause. Also remove redundant 'to' after 'helped me'.'

× I can mess system joy ruptures or video call to catch up whenever I have free.

✓ I can message, use voice calls, or video call to catch up whenever I am free.

The original contains garbled words 'mess system joy ruptures'. Likely intended 'message, use voice calls'. Also 'whenever I have free' is incorrect — use 'whenever I am free'. Reordering yields a parallel list of actions.'

× Yes, there are many changes in the recent year in the websites that I often visit, for instance, Facebook and Instagram.

✓ Yes, there have been many changes in the websites I often visit in recent years, for instance Facebook and Instagram.

When referring to changes that occurred over a period up to now, present perfect 'have been' is appropriate. Also 'recent year' should be plural 'recent years' unless specifying a single year. Word order adjusted for natural flow.'

× They are now become more interactive and engaging with the users with smoother and faster interfaces with Mac or experience visually appealing and engage umm.

✓ They have become more interactive and engaging for users, with smoother, faster interfaces and a more visually appealing experience.

'are now become' is ungrammatical; use 'have become'. 'With the users' should be 'for users'. 'Mac or experience' appears corrupted — intended 'a more visually appealing experience'. Adjectives 'smoother, faster' need comma; 'engage' should be 'engaging' to match parallel structure.'

× I I think it depends on the person.

✓ I think it depends on the person.

Duplicate 'I' is a repetition error rather than grammar type listed, but removing the extra 'I' corrects the sentence to singular subject. The intended meaning uses singular noun 'person' correctly.'

× They can visit educational website just to learn English or improve or learn new skills.

✓ They can visit educational websites just to learn English or to improve or learn new skills.

Use plural 'websites' for general category. Also add 'to' before the infinitive 'improve' to parallel 'to learn'.'

× Why? The other would be just entertainment website such as Facebook or Instagram just to relax of the work and umm, most popular uh, website in my country could be uh, new site or.

✓ Another option would be entertainment websites such as Facebook or Instagram to relax after work. The most popular websites in my country could be news sites or social media platforms.

Sentence was fragmented and unclear. 'Why?' is unnecessary. 'Entertainment website' should be plural; 'relax of the work' corrected to 'relax after work'. 'Most popular website' changed to plural and clarified examples like 'news sites or social media platforms' to complete the thought.'

× I think I prefer getting information of from websites because it provide real time update and later nude uh with book cannot match.

✓ I think I prefer getting information from websites because they provide real-time updates that books cannot match.

Remove incorrect 'of'; use 'from'. Subject-verb agreement: 'websites' requires 'provide'. 'real time update' should be 'real-time updates'. 'later nude uh with book' is garbled; intended meaning 'that books cannot match'.'

× On top of that, I'm rarely read book and umm News Online news or uh on social media would be really more convenient and accessible for me.

✓ On top of that, I rarely read books, and online news or social media is much more convenient and accessible for me.

'I'm rarely read' is incorrect — use 'I rarely read'. 'book' should be plural 'books'. 'News Online news or on social media' simplified to 'online news or social media'. Use 'is' for the singular concept of 'online news or social media' as a source; 'much more' preferred over 'really more'.'

× Yes, I would love to have my own website where I can share my life with my dog who always would be my companion.

✓ Yes, I would love to have my own website where I can share my life with my dog, who will always be my companion.

Sequence and modality: 'would be' sounds conditional; use 'will always be' to express a confident future fact about the dog. Add comma before 'who' for nonrestrictive clause.'

× I would post photos and short videos about our daily routine and maybe offer teeth for other dog owners who also want a simple and happy lifestyle.

✓ I would post photos and short videos about our daily routine and maybe offer tips for other dog owners who also want a simple and happy lifestyle.

'teeth' is a wrong word choice; likely intended 'tips'. 'Offer tips' is the correct collocation. Quantifier not main issue but word choice corrected for meaning.'

× I have learned a lot from the website that support my studies and like daily life.

✓ I have learned a lot from websites that support my studies and daily life.

Use plural 'websites' for general sources. 'the website' suggests a specific one; 'websites' matches general experience. Remove extraneous 'like'. Ensure plural verb agreement: 'support' matches 'websites'.'

× For example, they taught me self discrepancies, how to stay focused on one task at a time and avoid multiple tasks being tasking or pressuring myself or because trying to do several things that the one can increase my anxiety and reduce my productivity.

✓ For example, they taught me about self-discipline, how to stay focused on one task at a time, and to avoid multitasking, which can increase my anxiety and reduce my productivity.

The phrase 'self discrepancies' is incorrect; likely 'self-discipline'. 'Avoid multiple tasks being tasking or pressuring myself' is awkward; replace with 'avoid multitasking'. Use a relative clause 'which can increase' to link cause and effect. Simplify and correct word forms for clarity.'