Talents— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it is somewhat repetitive and has grammatical errors. Keep your answer direct with one strong topic sentence, follow with one or two specific supporting details, and avoid repeating phrases. Use correct tense and subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'I have a talent for cooking', 'when someone comes to my house, I make many dishes').

例: I’m good at cooking. For example, when guests come to my house I usually prepare a variety of dishes and they often compliment my food.

提案: The meaning is understandable but the answer has awkward phrasing and tense issues. Start with a clear time reference (e.g., ‘I started when I was young’), then briefly describe how you learned (e.g., classes, practice). Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' correctly and avoid filler words.

例: I started learning to cook when I was young because I was very interested in food. I took cooking classes and practised regularly, which helped me improve my skills.

提案: Good idea and clear purpose, but the sentence is long and has grammar issues (articles, prepositions, verb forms). Be concise: state your opinion, give one reason with a specific detail, and use correct prepositions (e.g., 'go to Canada').

例: Yes. I plan to move to Canada and work as a chef because chefs earn good salaries there. With my cooking skills I hope to build a successful career abroad.

提案: Your answer communicates the idea but has multiple grammatical mistakes and is a bit confusing. Begin with a direct statement, then give a specific example about your mother. Use correct verb forms and clearer linking (e.g., 'when I watch her cook, I learn and try to copy her recipes').

例: Yes, my mother is also a good cook. She makes delicious chapatis and when I watch her prepare new dishes, I learn from her and try to recreate them.

× Well, to be honest, I have a talent of cooking and that is a very great talent I have.

✓ Well, to be honest, I have a talent for cooking and that is a great talent of mine.

Use 'talent for' not 'talent of' and possessive phrase 'a talent of mine' or 'a great talent of mine' is correct. 'Very great' is awkward; 'great' suffices. Also 'talent for cooking' is the natural collocation. (English (India))

× And when someone came in my house at that time, I make a lot of dishes for them and they also appreciate me when they eat my dishes.

✓ When someone comes to my house, I make a lot of dishes for them and they appreciate my food when they eat it.

Use present tense 'comes' to match habitual action. Use 'comes to my house' not 'came in my house'; 'come to' is correct preposition. 'Appreciate me' is incorrect; people appreciate the food or say they appreciate what you cooked. Use 'appreciate my food' or 'appreciate it.' Also 'when they eat my dishes' is awkward; 'when they eat it' or 'when they try my food' is better. (English (India))

× It's a gorgeous to me because I have a great interest in cooking and after when I get younger at at that time I take in the classes of cooking and I improve my skills.

✓ It is wonderful to me because I have a great interest in cooking, and when I was younger I took cooking classes and improved my skills.

'Gorgeous' describes appearance, not interest; 'wonderful' or 'great' fits. Tense and time sequence: use past 'when I was younger' and 'I took' for completed actions. Remove extra words 'after when' and duplicate 'at'. Use 'took cooking classes' instead of 'take in the classes of cooking.' (English (India))

× Yes, of course I want to go Canada for my upcoming future and in the Canada the salary of a chef is very high and that's why I think it's helps me a lot in my future and I want to become a very good chef.

✓ Yes, of course I want to go to Canada in the future, and in Canada the salary of a chef is very high, so I think it will help me a lot and I want to become a good chef.

Use 'go to Canada' with preposition 'to'. Do not use 'the Canada' — country names usually have no article. 'Upcoming future' is redundant; use 'in the future.' 'It's helps' mixes 'it' with verb; correct is 'it will help' (future tense). Remove 'very' before 'good' if not needed; 'good chef' is natural. Maintain consistent tense and article use. (English (India))

× Yes my mother have my mother make very delicious chapati and I when I seen her to making new dishes I get appreciated from her and I also try to make like her dishes.

✓ Yes, my mother makes very delicious chapatis, and when I see her making new dishes I learn from her and I also try to make dishes like hers.

Subject-verb agreement: 'my mother have' should be 'my mother makes.' Use plural 'chapatis' for general statement. Use present simple 'see' for habitual action rather than 'seen.' 'I get appreciated from her' is incorrect: you learn from her or she praises you; use 'I learn from her.' 'Making' needs no 'to' after 'see her.' Use 'dishes like hers' to show comparison. (English (India))