Art— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you like drawing?
受験者
Yes, I love drawing, especially a nature drawing. I think is very beautiful and when I look on it I feel relaxing.
試験官
Do you like to go to the gallery?
受験者
Yes, I love to go to the gallery because I find this place is very peaceful and I love to go there when I would like to relieve my stress from work.
試験官
Do you want to learn more about art?
受験者
Yes, I would like to learn more about art. This is because my skill is very terrible. I would like to learn how to drawing or painting. I think it helped me to stay concentrate on everything.
試験官
Did you learn drawing when you were a kid?
受験者
Yes, drawing is contained in the compulsory subject. When I was a child I learned drawings. I feel very exciting and happy to learn it.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you like drawing?
スコア: 68.0提案: Make the response more grammatical, concise, and varied. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct article and verb forms, and add one specific detail using a linking word. Keep it under five sentences.
例: Yes, I love drawing, especially scenes of nature. For example, I often draw trees and rivers because their shapes and colours calm me. When I look at my drawings, I feel relaxed and more focused.
Do you like to go to the gallery?
スコア: 74.0提案: Avoid repetition and improve grammar and cohesion. Use a clear main sentence, then add one or two supporting details with linking words (for example, because, so) and a specific example of what you enjoy seeing.
例: Yes, I enjoy visiting galleries because they are peaceful and inspiring. For example, I especially like exhibitions of landscape paintings, which help me relax after a busy week at work.
Do you want to learn more about art?
スコア: 62.0提案: Use more natural phrasing and correct grammar. Give one focused reason and a concrete plan or example of what you want to learn. Use linking words like because or so to connect ideas and avoid vague words like 'terrible'.
例: Yes, I would like to learn more about art because I want to improve my drawing and painting skills. For instance, I plan to take a weekend class to learn shading and colour mixing so I can make my work look more realistic.
Did you learn drawing when you were a kid?
スコア: 70.0提案: Make sentences more natural and grammatically correct. Give a clear topic sentence, then add a specific memory or detail linked with a connective (for example, and, because) to show why it was enjoyable.
例: Yes, we had drawing lessons as a compulsory school subject when I was a child. I enjoyed them because my teacher encouraged creativity, and I felt excited when my drawings were displayed on the classroom wall.
文法
× Yes, I love drawing, especially a nature drawing.
✓ Yes, I love drawing, especially drawings of nature.
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