Dreams— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cần trả lời trực tiếp hơn, cấu trúc câu rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Thêm chi tiết cụ thể (tần suất, ví dụ ngắn) và dùng liên từ để mạch lạc. Ví dụ: mở đầu khẳng định, sau đó nêu tần suất và một ví dụ ngắn về lần duy nhất bạn nhớ.

例: I usually can't remember my dreams when I wake up, but occasionally I do. For example, last month I remembered a vivid dream about flying over my city, which stayed with me for a few hours.

提案: Cần ngắn gọn, dùng cấu trúc đúng ngữ pháp (chủ-động-động từ), không lặp. Nên nêu ai bạn chia sẻ, tần suất và lý do. Sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể về cuộc trò chuyện.

例: Yes, I often tell my family and friends about my dreams when I remember them because we find them amusing. For instance, last week I described a strange dream to my sister and we laughed while trying to interpret its meaning.

提案: Câu trả lời hiện tại thiếu rõ ràng và nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp khiến ý không truyền đạt được. Hãy nêu rõ quan điểm (có/không), giải thích lý do bằng câu hoàn chỉnh và đưa ví dụ cụ thể; sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp (meaningful, symbolic, realistic).

例: Yes, I think dreams can have symbolic meanings because they often contain strange images that don't happen in real life. For example, dreaming of being chased might reflect stress or unresolved problems.

提案: Cần trả lời trực tiếp rồi giải thích lý do rõ ràng với các chi tiết bổ sung. Tránh dùng từ mơ hồ như "maybe no"; thay bằng "No" hoặc "Not really" và nêu ví dụ về điều bạn thấy khó hiểu hoặc nhàm chán.

例: Not really. I don't try to make my dreams come true because they are often strange and hard to interpret. For example, I once dreamed about talking animals, which was entertaining but not something I would try to achieve in real life.

× Oh no, when I get up I can't remember my dreams, but sometimes I can remember.

✓ Oh no, when I get up I can't remember my dreams, but sometimes I remember them.

The sentence uses present simple correctly but omits the object 'them' after 'remember'. Add 'them' for clarity and correct object reference. Also 'can remember' can be simplified to 'remember' to match natural usage.

× Oh yes, when I can remember my dreams, I often interpreted my dream with my friends.

✓ Oh yes, when I can remember my dreams, I often interpret my dreams with my friends.

The verb 'interpreted' is in the past tense; the context is habitual so present simple 'interpret' is required. Also make 'dream' plural to match 'dreams' and habitual action.

× My mum, my dad and my sister is very interesting and funny.

✓ My mum, my dad and my sister are very interesting and funny.

The subject is plural (three people), so the verb must be plural 'are' instead of 'is'. Ensure subject-verb agreement.

× Yes, because I usually have green quite difficult to understand and I think is not have in the real life.

✓ Yes, because I usually have dreams that are green and quite difficult to understand, and I think they do not happen in real life.

The original sentence has missing nouns and incorrect structure. Add 'dreams' and a relative clause 'that are' to describe them; use 'they do not happen' instead of 'is not have' to form a correct negative present simple. Also separate ideas with a comma and 'and' for clarity.

× Maybe no, because my dream is very boring and too difficult to understand.

✓ Maybe not, because my dream is very boring and too difficult to understand.

Use 'not' after 'maybe' to negate properly. The rest of the sentence is fine in present simple describing a general opinion.