Dreams— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Give a direct, grammatical topic sentence and then briefly explain why you forget dreams. Use linking words and keep to 2–3 clear sentences. Be specific about when or how often you forget them.

例: I rarely remember my dreams when I wake up. Usually I forget them because I wake up quickly or get busy with my phone, so the details fade from my memory.

提案: Answer directly whether you share dreams, then give a clear example. Use linking words like "if" or "but" and correct verb forms. Keep it to 2–3 sentences and be specific about who you tell and why.

例: I sometimes share my dreams with close friends and family, especially if the dream was scary. For example, if I dream about snakes, I tell my sister because she helps me understand why I felt frightened.

提案: State your opinion clearly, then support it with a reason or example using linking words like "however" or "for example." Avoid double negatives and use correct tense and noun forms.

例: I am not sure if dreams have special meanings; however, some people believe they reflect our past or future. For example, my grandmother often interprets dreams as messages about future events.

提案: Give a clear goal and explain specific steps or reasons. Use correct phrases for studying abroad and choose precise vocabulary (e.g., "study" not "reading"). Keep it to 2–3 well-formed sentences.

例: Yes, I want to make my dream come true by studying abroad in South Korea. I plan to apply for a university program to learn Korean language and culture, meet new friends, and gain international experience.

× No, I cannot remember dreams when I wake up because in that, not the fact that.

✓ No, I cannot remember my dreams when I wake up because that is not the case.

The original sentence has unclear structure and missing possessive and idiomatic phrasing. 'Dreams' needs the possessive 'my' to indicate whose dreams. 'Because in that, not the fact that' is ungrammatical; replace with 'because that is not the case' to express the intended meaning clearly. Suggestion: use clear clauses and correct possessive forms.

× When I look horror, when I saw dreams of horror some snakes that kinds of dreams.

✓ When I have horror dreams, I sometimes see snakes in those kinds of dreams.

The original uses incorrect verbs and prepositions: 'look horror' and 'saw dreams of horror' are ungrammatical. Use the noun phrase 'horror dreams' or 'nightmares'. Use 'have' for experiencing dreams and 'in' to place content within dreams. Also change word order and add 'sometimes' for natural frequency. Suggestion: say 'I have horror dreams' or 'I have nightmares.'

× I still are interested with my friends and family.

✓ I am still interested in sharing them with my friends and family.

'I still are' uses incorrect verb form for the pronoun 'I' (should be 'am'); this is both pronoun-verb agreement and verb form. The preposition 'with' is wrong for 'interested in' or for 'share with'. To convey sharing dreams, rephrase to 'interested in sharing them with my friends and family.' Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement and correct prepositions.

× Uh, but I didn't actually don't know the dreams is special meanings are not.

✓ Uh, actually I don't know whether dreams have special meanings or not.

The sentence has double negation ('didn't actually don't') and incorrect word order. Use 'actually I don't know whether...' to show uncertainty. Use 'have' for 'dreams have meanings' and 'or not' to present alternatives. Suggestion: avoid double negatives and use standard 'whether ... or not' constructions.

× But uh, some old people said that your dreams is related with your futures and past.

✓ But some older people say that your dreams are related to your future and past.

Errors: tense and agreement ('said' vs 'say' — present reporting general belief), 'some old people' is better as 'some older people'. 'Your dreams is' has subject-verb agreement error; 'dreams' requires plural verb 'are'. Preposition 'related with' should be 'related to'. 'Futures' should be singular 'future'. Suggestion: match verb number and use correct prepositions.

× Yeah, I want to make my dreams come true.

✓ Yes, I want to make my dreams come true.

This sentence is grammatically correct aside from the informal 'Yeah.' Use 'Yes' for more formal register in a test. Tense and structure are appropriate for expressing current desire. Suggestion: prefer 'Yes' in formal speaking tests.

× Like I'm going, uh, South Korea abroad for reading.

✓ For example, I want to go abroad to South Korea to study.

The original sentence is awkward and ungrammatical: 'going, uh, South Korea abroad for reading' misorders elements and uses 'reading' where 'studying' is intended. Use 'go abroad to South Korea to study' for clear purpose. Suggestion: use 'to study' rather than 'for reading.'

× Reading some new low knowledge, new knowledge, new culture experience, new friends, new vibrations.

✓ I want to learn new knowledge, experience a new culture, make new friends, and feel new experiences.

This fragment is a list but uses incorrect or awkward nouns like 'low knowledge' and 'new vibrations.' Replace with natural phrases: 'learn new things' or 'gain new knowledge', 'experience a new culture', 'make new friends', 'have new experiences.' Suggestion: use idiomatic collocations and parallel structure in lists.