Dreams— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be direct and clear. Start with a short topic sentence answering the question, then add 1–2 specific supporting details. Use correct verb forms and avoid confusing phrases. Link ideas with simple connectors if needed.

例: Yes, I can remember some of my dreams. For example, I often dream about creative stories and characters, and when I wake up I can recall the plot and feelings clearly.

提案: Answer directly then give a clear reason or example. Use coherent sentences and avoid vague or fragmented phrases. Keep within 2–4 sentences and use linking words like "because" or "so".

例: Yes, I often share my dreams with my friends because they enjoy hearing unusual stories. For instance, I usually text them right after I wake up and describe the most interesting scenes so we can laugh or discuss their meaning.

提案: State your opinion clearly and support it with a specific reason or short example. Avoid filler words and unclear phrases. Use correct grammar for conditional or past situations.

例: Yes, I think dreams can have special meanings because they sometimes reflect our worries or desires. For example, when I dream about exams it usually shows I am anxious about my studies and reminds me to prepare better.

提案: Give a clear topic sentence saying whether you want to achieve your dream, then add a specific plan or example of what you are doing. Use correct present continuous or simple tenses and avoid repetition.

例: Yes, I definitely want to make my dream come true. I want to become a doctor, so I am studying hard at school, taking biology classes, and preparing for medical entrance exams to reach that goal.

× I mean I usually dreaming and actually I am a reality in the reality I'm AI am a creative person so that I can remember what exactly my dreams tell me.

✓ I mean I usually dream, and actually in reality I am a creative person, so I can remember exactly what my dreams tell me.

The phrase 'usually dreaming' uses the -ing form incorrectly; after 'usually' the base form 'dream' is required for habitual actions. 'I am a reality in the reality I'm AI am a creative person' contains several structural errors; 'in reality' is the correct expression and redundant/misplaced words were removed. Also word order and extra words were corrected for clarity. Suggestion: use 'usually' + base verb for habits and keep sentences concise. (Grammar problem type ID: 8)

× I always text to my friends and tell them about my dreams.

✓ I always text my friends and tell them about my dreams.

When using 'text' to mean send a message, the verb is transitive and does not require the preposition 'to'. Remove 'to'. Suggestion: use 'text someone' or 'send a text to someone'. (Grammar problem type ID: 11)

× How is grateful, how is creative, and how is incredibly.

✓ They are grateful, creative, and incredibly supportive.

The original fragment 'How is grateful' is ungrammatical and lacks a subject. Single adjectives cannot stand alone as responses here; convert to full clauses or noun phrases. 'Incredibly' is an adverb and needs an adjective to modify, so add 'supportive' (or another appropriate adjective). Suggestion: provide a subject and match adverbs to adjectives. (Grammar problem type ID: 13)

× It can be a lesson for my life if I was struggle with something that I'm umm, a appearance appearance.

✓ It can be a lesson for my life if I struggle with something that appears.

'Was struggle' is incorrect: after 'if' for a general possibility use present simple 'struggle'. 'Appearance appearance' is repetitive and unclear; likely intended 'appears' as a verb. Also keep conditional type consistent: 'can be' pairs with present simple in the 'if' clause. Suggestion: use present simple in real conditional clauses and choose the correct verb form. (Grammar problem type ID: 9)

× I mean, the ambition, the ambition of myself is really, I just want to be your doctor in the future.

✓ My ambition is to become a doctor in the future.

'The ambition of myself' is awkward; use the possessive pronoun 'my'. 'I just want to be your doctor' is likely incorrect contextually; 'a doctor' or 'a doctor in the future' fits. Also 'become' is the correct collocation with 'ambition'. Suggestion: use 'my ambition is to' + infinitive to state goals. (Grammar problem type ID: 12)

× And I right now I'm trying to have to study and becoming a doctor like so that I want to make my dream come true.

✓ Right now I'm studying to become a doctor because I want to make my dream come true.

The original mixes incorrect auxiliaries and verb forms: 'trying to have to study' is incorrect; use 'trying to study' or 'I am studying'. 'Becoming' should be the infinitive 'to become' after 'study' or 'studying to become'. Also reorder for natural English: express purpose with 'because' or 'so that'. Suggestion: use 'I'm studying to become' or 'I'm trying to become' for current efforts toward a goal. (Grammar problem type ID: 6)