Mirrors— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 句子需更自然並修正語法錯誤。回答應直接且有主題句，並補充一兩個具體細節，使用連接詞使語意流暢。注意動詞搭配（例如：look at myself, to tidy my hair/adjust my appearance, to boost my mood）。控制在最多5句內。

例: Yes, I look at myself in the mirror every day. I usually check my hair and clothes to make sure I look tidy, and sometimes I practice a smile to boost my mood before going out.

提案: 內容不清晰且有語法錯誤（mural應為mirror；句子未完成）。應直接回答是或否，接著給出具體細節（例如購買時間、用途、尺寸），並用連接詞把句子連起來。避免句子未說完。

例: Yes, I bought a mirror last year for my dormitory. It is about one metre tall and I use it to check my outfit and groom myself before classes.

提案: 答得較自然但有語法及詞序問題（as small as my hand → as small as my hand/hand-sized; put it on my bag → in my bag）。可以加一個原因或場合來豐富內容，並使用連接詞使流暢。保持句子簡潔。

例: Yes, I usually carry a small hand mirror with me. It fits in my bag, so I can quickly check my makeup or hair when I'm out.

提案: 答案含混且語意不明（milk? barrier?），語法時態也不一致。應先直接回答（No或Yes），然後解釋原因並給出具體細節或替代方案。使用清楚的詞彙（decorate, prefer, curtains, posters等）。

例: No, I wouldn't use mirrors to decorate my room because I prefer soft furnishings like curtains and cushions. Mirrors feel too cold for the cozy atmosphere I want to create.

× I look myself in the mirror every day because I want to adjust myself I want to keep going and look cheerful.

✓ I look at myself in the mirror every day because I want to adjust my appearance. I want to keep going and look cheerful.

句中缺少介词“at”，正确搭配是“look at someone”。此外原句中两次使用“myself”显得重复累赘，第二处改为“my appearance”更自然、清晰；两个并列句之间需要标点或连词分开（在这里用句号）。建议：记住动词“look”后若表示注视要加介词“at”，避免重复使用反身代词，必要时用名词短语替代。

× Yes, I have bought a mural and put it on my accommodation university. Its length one meter and it's

✓ Yes, I have bought a mirror and put it in my university accommodation. It is one meter long.

原句有多处问题：1) “mural”应为“mirror”（词汇错误，虽不在列表但与语法相关且会影响理解）；2) 介词选择错误，应为“in my university accommodation”（表示放在住宿里）；3) 所有格和句子结构错误，应使用“It is one meter long.” 来描述长度。建议：注意名词拼写并使用正确介词，描述尺寸时用“X is Y long”。

× Do you usually take a mirror with you?

✓ Do you usually take a mirror with you?

该句本身语法正确，无需改动。保持现在时的一般疑问句，副词“usually”位置正确。

× Yes, I usually take a mirror with me. I have a mirror as small as my hand and I put it on my bag to stay every time with me.

✓ Yes, I usually take a mirror with me. I have a mirror as small as my hand and I put it in my bag to keep with me all the time.

原句中“put it on my bag”应为“put it in my bag”表示放进包里；“to stay every time with me”语序和动词选择不自然，改为“to keep with me all the time”更地道。建议：注意介词（in/on）区别和固定短语“keep with me”或“keep it with me”。

× No, I didn't because I use milk, but I don't know how to how to make it as a barrier.

✓ No, I didn't because I used milk, and I don't know how to make it into a barrier.

句中时态不一致：提到过去的行为应使用过去时“used milk”，原句“didn't because I use milk”时态混乱；此外有重复“how to how to”，并且“make it as a barrier”表达不自然，改为“make it into a barrier”。建议：保持句子内部时态一致，检查重复词并使用固定搭配“make into”来表示把某物变成另一物。