Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be concise, avoid repetition, and provide a clear topic sentence followed by specific supporting details. Use correct verb forms and article usage (e.g., “a bike,” “I used to ride a bike”). Include linking words like “so” or “and” to make the answer flow, and keep the response to no more than 3–4 sentences.

例: Yes, I did. I used to ride a bike every weekend when I was a child to visit nearby parks and play with my friends. Because the parks were close to my home, cycling was a convenient and fun way to spend the afternoons.

提案: Give a direct topic sentence, correct grammar (subject-verb agreement: “people have”), and add a specific reason or an example. Use linking words like “because,” “for example,” or “as a result” to make your reasoning clearer and more natural.

例: Yes, I do think bikes are popular because many people use them for short trips and commuting. For example, in my city lots of students and workers cycle to school or work since it is cheap and faster in crowded areas.

× 'I used bike every weekend to go and to to go somewhere, play somewhere to play with my friends.'

✓ 'I used a bike every weekend to go somewhere to play with my friends.'

'Used' is past tense which is appropriate, but the sentence is missing the article 'a' before 'bike' and contains repetition and awkward phrasing. Use 'used a bike' for past habit and simplify to 'to go somewhere to play with my friends.' Suggestion: include the article before singular countable nouns and remove duplicate words.'

× 'Yes I do, because most of the people in this country has their own bikes.'

✓ 'Yes, I do, because most of the people in this country have their own bikes.'

'People' is plural, so the verb must agree and be 'have' not 'has.' Also add a comma after 'Yes' for natural writing. Suggestion: match verb number to plural subjects; with plural nouns use plural verbs (have).'