Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevap kısa ve dilbilgisi hatalı; daha doğal, tam bir cümle kur ve gerekirse bir detay ekle. Örneğin geçmiş zaman kullanımına dikkat et (I had), gereksiz duraklamaları azalt ve kısa bir ek cümleyle nedenini veya anıyı belirt.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it to my friend’s house every afternoon because it was the quickest way to get there.

提案: Cümleler karışık ve bağlaçlar doğru kullanılmamış; düşünceni açık bir giriş cümlesi ile belirt, sonra kısa sebepler ver. Karşılaştırma yapıyorsan net bağlaçlar kullan (however, whereas, for example) ve cümleleri düzgün zaman ve yapı ile kur.

例: I think bikes are moderately popular in my country. For example, many people use them in cities for short trips, whereas in countries like Belgium cycling is less common for daily transport.

× Yeah, I have a, uh, bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

The examiner asked about the past ('when you were a child'), so the student should use past tense. 'Have' is present tense; change to 'had' to match the time reference. Suggestion: use past simple for completed situations in the past (I had a bike when I was a child).

× It's. Both popular and not when I compare the other countries like Belgium is not popular at all people in my country use.

✓ It's both popular and not when I compare it with other countries. For example, bikes are not popular at all in Belgium, but people in my country use them.

The original sentence is fragmented and has incorrect clause connections and missing pronouns. 'It's. Both popular and not' is a broken sentence; combine ideas into one coherent sentence. Use 'compare it with other countries' to include the subject 'it' (bikes). Separate the example with a clear clause: 'For example, bikes are not popular at all in Belgium, but people in my country use them.' Also correct verb forms and word order. Suggestions: avoid sentence fragments, include pronouns for clarity, and use conjunctions or punctuation to join related clauses.