Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Speak in the past tense consistently, keep answers concise (max 5 sentences), and organize with a clear topic sentence followed by one or two supporting details using linking words. Correct basic grammar (e.g., subject-verb agreement and tense), avoid redundant phrases, and use more precise vocabulary (e.g., "learn to ride a bike" not "learn the bike cycle").

例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. I wanted to learn to ride, but my parents were worried about injuries, so they didn't allow it. Later, when I was older, I learned to ride and became quite confident.

提案: Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words (e.g., "for example", "because"). Use precise vocabulary ("children often learn to cycle" instead of "learn to ride the bicycle") and avoid repeating the same words. Limit to 3–4 sentences for clarity and naturalness.

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many children learn to cycle at an early age because parents often teach them. Cycling is also a common sport and a practical way to get around in towns.

× In my childhood I don't have a bike.

✓ In my childhood I didn't have a bike.

The sentence refers to a past time period 'In my childhood' so the present tense 'don't have' is incorrect. Use the past simple 'didn't have' for negative statements about the past. Suggestion: use 'didn't have' for past negatives.

× my parents were quite scared of injury, so they don't allow me to ride the bike.

✓ my parents were quite scared of injury, so they didn't allow me to ride the bike.

The clause begins in the past ('my parents were quite scared'), so the modal negative 'don't allow' should be in past form 'didn't allow' to maintain consistent past tense. Suggestion: match verb tense to the time frame already established.

× But as they grown up now I learn how to ride a bike and I have much quiet abilities.

✓ But as I grew up, I learned how to ride a bike and I gained quite a few abilities.

This sentence has multiple issues. 'they grown up' is incorrect: 'grown' needs an auxiliary or should be past simple 'grew' and pronoun 'they' is wrong because the speaker is referring to themselves. 'I learn' is present but should be past 'I learned' to match the time sequence. 'I have much quiet abilities' is ungrammatical: 'much' is incorrect with countable plural 'abilities' and 'quiet' is a misspelling of 'quite'. Use 'quite a few abilities' or 'many skills'. Suggestion: use consistent past tense and correct pronoun, and use appropriate quantifier and adjective spelling.

× From the childhood itself, children learn to ride the bicycle and parents also played a crucial role in teaching how to ride a bike.

✓ From childhood, children learn to ride bicycles and parents also play a crucial role in teaching them how to ride.

The phrase 'From the childhood itself' is unnatural; use 'From childhood'. 'bicycle' should be plural 'bicycles' when speaking generally. The original mixes past tense 'played' with general present 'learn'; since this is a general truth, use present simple 'play'. Also include an object 'them' after 'teaching'. Suggestion: use present simple for habitual facts, plural for general countable nouns, and include appropriate objects.

× And it's a quite popular kind of sports as well among the children.

✓ And it's quite a popular kind of sport among children.

Use 'quite' before adjective without article 'a quite popular' is okay but 'a quite popular kind of sports' is incorrect because 'sports' should be singular 'sport' when preceded by 'a kind of'. Also 'among the children' is better as 'among children' for general statement. Suggestion: use 'kind of sport' and place 'quite' before 'popular'.