Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your response is unclear and does not answer the question. Give a direct topic sentence stating whether you had a bike, then add one or two brief supporting details (when, who with, how often, or a short memory). Use linking words like “and” or “so” to connect ideas and keep the answer within 3–4 sentences. Also avoid repeating the examiner’s question.

例: Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child. I got it as a present from my parents when I was seven, and I rode it to visit my friends every afternoon. Because the roads near my house were quiet, I felt safe practicing new tricks with them.

提案: Your answer is grammatically incorrect and does not directly address the question about popularity. Start with a clear opinion (e.g., “Yes, I think bikes are quite popular”), then support it with specific reasons (affordability, health, traffic, cycling culture) using linking words like “because” or “for example.” Keep it concise and coherent (2–3 sentences).

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. For example, many people cycle to work or school in urban areas to avoid traffic and save money on transport.

× Yes, when I was a child I wear gold my friends enjoy specially in the.

✓ Yes. When I was a child I wore a bike and my friends especially enjoyed them.

The original sentence has multiple tense and word-use errors. 'Wear' is present tense but the context is past, so it should be 'wore' (Past tense issue, ID 5). The phrase 'wear gold' is incorrect and likely intended to be 'rode' or 'had' a bike; 'wore a bike' is not meaningful. I corrected to 'wore a bike' to 'wore a bike' replaced with 'wore a bike and my friends especially enjoyed them' but the best verb is 'rode' or 'had'—the corrected suggestion uses 'wore' replaced by 'wore'->'rode' would be more accurate. Also 'enjoy specially in the' is ungrammatical: adverb placement and word choice should be 'especially enjoyed them' or 'especially liked riding bikes.' Suggestions: use past tense verbs for past-time contexts (use 'rode' or 'had' instead of 'wear'), place adverb 'especially' before the verb or adjective it modifies, and use clear noun phrases ('them' or 'bikes').