Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Corrija a gramática e responda diretamente. Use uma frase-tópico clara e depois detalhes específicos (por exemplo, quando a teve, quem a ofereceu, como a usava). Evite repetir a pergunta. Utilize ligações simples como "When I was...", "because" e "so" para coerência.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle that my parents bought me for my seventh birthday, and I used it almost every day to ride to the park. Because the area was quiet and safe, I felt free to explore with my friends, so I learned to ride quickly.

提案: Responda diretamente e ofereça razões específicas. Comece com uma frase de opinião e depois explique com exemplos ou comparações. Use conectores como "because", "for example" e "however" para estruturar a resposta.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and commuting. For example, in cities there are bike lanes and rental schemes, which make cycling convenient; however, in rural areas cars are still more common.

× They do have a bike. When you were a child.

✓ I did have a bike when I was a child.

The student used the third-person plural pronoun 'They' incorrectly when referring to themselves; the correct subject is first-person singular 'I'. Also the sentence structure was split into two fragments; combine into one coherent past-tense statement. Use past tense 'did have' or simply 'had' to match the time frame. Suggestion: replace 'They do have' with 'I did have' or 'I had' and attach the clause 'when I was a child' to form a complete sentence.

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

The student repeated the examiner's question instead of answering; this is a pragmatic/sentence-structure issue rather than a verb tense error. Provide a direct response in the correct present-tense form. Use 'I think' for personal opinion and 'in my country' as the correct prepositional phrase. Suggestion: answer the question with a full sentence like 'Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.' or 'No, I don't think bikes are very popular in my country.'