Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Improve grammatical accuracy and naturalness. Use past tense consistently and provide a brief supporting detail. Keep it short (1–3 sentences) and avoid redundancy.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I rode it to school and around my neighborhood almost every day, which helped me learn balance and independence.

提案: Work on fluency, grammar, and organization. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words (e.g., because, therefore). Avoid hesitations and repetitions; use plural/singular agreement correctly.

例: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country because traffic is usually very busy and roads are dominated by cars. As a result, many people prefer cars or public transport for safety and convenience.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student mixed present tense 'have' with a past time expression 'when I was a child'. Use past tense 'had' for actions or states that occurred in the past. Suggestion: Match verb tense to time markers (e.g., use 'had' with 'when I was...').

× In my opinion, uh, bikes are, uh, bikes doesn't, uh, don't like, uh, don't popular in my country, uh, because the traffic is so busy and uh, the car there are, there are many cars in the highway or the other streets, so it's very difficult.

✓ In my opinion, bikes are not popular in my country because traffic is so busy and there are many cars on the highways and other streets, so it is very difficult.

Multiple issues: double negatives and incorrect verb forms are used. 'Bikes doesn't/don't popular' is ungrammatical; use 'are not popular' (present plural with 'be'). 'The car there are' mixes singular/plural and word order; use 'there are many cars'. Preposition error: use 'on the highways' rather than 'in the highway'. Also use 'it is' instead of 'it's' if clarity needed. Suggestions: avoid filler words (uh), use correct subject-verb agreement ('bikes are'), use 'there are' for existence of plural nouns, and use 'on' with roads/highways.