Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ответ хороший по содержанию, но есть ошибки и неточности. Во-первых, предложение «who taught me how to write» вероятно ошибка — должно быть «taught me how to ride». Во-вторых, фразы можно сделать более естественными и компактными: начать с прямого ответа, затем одно-два поддерживающих предложения. Избегайте лишних слов и следите за согласованием (например, «we enjoyed spending time together» можно связать логически). Также старайтесь использовать связки (for example, because, so) и более точную лексику (ride, family outings).

例: Yes, I did. My bicycle was very important to me because I often rode it with my family and friends. For example, my father taught me how to ride, and we used to go on weekend rides together, which I still remember fondly.

提案: Идея ясна, но выражение некорректно и присутствуют грамматические ошибки и повторы («who crazy», «who who»). Ответ фрагментирован и обрывается. Следует давать более цельное утверждение, использовать связки (however, while, because) и конкретизировать примеры или причины. Избегайте ненужных повторов и завершайте мысль. Также используйте правильную форму глаголов и артиклей («the first group are people who are crazy about bicycles»).

例: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular, but attitudes vary. Some people are very enthusiastic about cycling because it helps them stay fit and saves money on transport, while others prefer cars or indoor hobbies and don't cycle often.

× When I was a child, I had a bicycle. It was very important to me because I often rode it with my family and friends, especially my father, who taught me how to write and we enjoyed spending time together.

✓ When I was a child, I had a bicycle. It was very important to me because I often rode it with my family and friends, especially my father, who taught me how to ride it, and we enjoyed spending time together.

The verb 'write' is incorrect in this context; the intended verb is 'ride'. This is a lexical error rather than a tense error, but it occurs in a past-tense narrative so maintain past tense 'taught'. Also add a comma and conjunction 'and' to join clauses correctly. Suggestion: Replace 'write' with 'ride' and connect clauses with ', and'. Grade-level note: ensure verbs match the activity described and maintain consistent past tense.

× I believe that we have two groups in my country. First group are people who crazy about bicycles who always want to keep fit and the second group is our people who who don't care about it and probably they have another hobby or.

✓ I believe that we have two groups in my country. The first group is people who are crazy about bicycles and who always want to keep fit, and the second group is people who don't care about them and probably have other hobbies.

Multiple issues corrected but focusing on singular/plural and related agreement: 'First group are' should be 'The first group is' (subject-verb agreement for singular 'group'). 'Who crazy' needs auxiliary 'are'. 'Bicycles' plural works with 'them' pronoun rather than 'it'. 'Another hobby or' is incomplete; change to 'other hobbies'. Suggestions: Use definite article 'the' before 'first group', match singular subject with singular verb, include 'are' after 'who', use plural pronouns for plural nouns, and complete the phrase to 'other hobbies'.