Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: You repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. Give a direct, natural response with a clear topic sentence, then one or two supporting details. Keep it under five sentences and use linking words if you add details. Be specific (e.g., type of bike, age, memories).

例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle with training wheels when I was about six, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood every afternoon. Because my parents encouraged me, I learned to ride without the training wheels by the time I was eight.

提案: Again, you repeated the question rather than answering. Start with a clear opinion (yes/no/partly), then support it with specific reasons or examples. Use linking words (for example, however, because) to connect ideas and keep responses concise (max 5 sentences).

例: Yes, I think bikes are fairly popular in my country, especially in cities. For example, many people use bicycles for short commutes because traffic is heavy and cycling lanes are improving, although car ownership is still common in suburbs.

× Did you have a bike when you were child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The noun 'child' needs the indefinite article 'a' when referring to a non-specific time in someone's childhood. Without the article the sentence is ungrammatical. Use 'a child' to indicate being in the state of childhood. Suggestion: include the article 'a' before 'child' in similar contexts (e.g., 'when I was a child'). Grammar problem type ID: 22

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

This sentence is grammatically correct. It uses the present simple to ask about a general truth or opinion and correctly uses plural 'bikes' and the adjective 'popular'. No correction needed. No grammar problem type ID from the provided list applies.