Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Bạn đã lặp lại câu hỏi của giám khảo thay vì trả lời. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp với một câu chủ đề ngắn, sau đó thêm 1–2 câu chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: loại xe, khi nào bạn có, ai tặng hoặc kỷ niệm liên quan). Sử dụng liên từ nếu cần để nối ý (ví dụ: “and”, “because”, “so”). Giữ tổng số câu không quá 5 câu.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was about seven years old. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels that my parents bought for me. I used to ride it every afternoon in the park near our home, and I remember learning to balance without the training wheels after a few weeks.

提案: Bạn tiếp tục chỉ lặp lại câu hỏi. Hãy nêu quan điểm rõ ràng ngay đầu (yes/no/partly), rồi giải thích cụ thể với lý do và một ví dụ (ví dụ: phổ biến ở thành phố hay nông thôn, vì lý do giao thông, sức khỏe, hay môi trường). Dùng liên từ để làm luận điểm mạch lạc và tránh lặp lại câu hỏi.

例: I think bikes are quite popular in some parts of my country, especially in rural areas and among students. Many people use bicycles for short trips because they are cheap and convenient, and some cities are starting to build bike lanes to encourage cycling for health and environmental reasons.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. This is a sentence structure/response error; the question is past tense (Did you...?/when you were...), so the correct response should use past simple 'had'. Suggestion: respond with a complete past-tense sentence (e.g., 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.') or a negative ('No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.').

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

The student repeated the examiner's question instead of giving an answer. The question uses present simple, so the appropriate response should be present simple as well ('I think...'). Suggestion: answer directly with a present-tense sentence such as 'Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.' or 'No, I don't think bikes are popular in my country.'.