Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevap kısa ve eksik; daha doğal ve açıklayıcı olmak için bir konu cümlesi kurun, ardından bir veya iki kısa destekleyici cümle ekleyin. Bağlaçlar kullanarak (for example, because, so) nedenleri veya anıları açıklayın. Ayrıca tam cümleler kullanın ve dilbilgisi olarak 'Yes, I had one' veya 'Yes, I did' gibi ifadeler tercih edin.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used it almost every day to ride to my friend’s house and to the park, so it was an important part of my childhood.

提案: Cümle dilbilgisi hatalı ve çok kısa; daha doğal ve etkili cevap için bir ana fikir cümlesi kurun, sonra bir veya iki destekleyici detay verin. Bağlaçlar (because, although, therefore) kullanarak nedenleri, yerleri veya karşılaştırmaları belirtin. Örneğin 'Yes, bikes are popular because...' şeklinde başlayın.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, in cities there are bike lanes and many students ride to school.

× Yes, I had.

✓ Yes, I did.

The examiner asked a past simple question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' The correct short answer for a yes/no question in past simple uses the auxiliary 'did' rather than repeating the main verb in past form. Saying 'Yes, I had' is not the conventional short response. Use 'Yes, I did' to confirm. Suggestion: For past simple questions formed with 'did', respond with 'Yes, I did' or 'No, I didn't.'

× Yes, bikes so popular in my country.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country.

The sentence is missing the appropriate auxiliary (be) verb and an adverb for emphasis. In present simple passive/state descriptions, use 'are' with the plural noun 'bikes'. Also add 'very' if you mean 'so' as emphasis in standard English. Suggestion: Use 'are' after plural subjects and replace informal 'so' with 'very' or restructure as 'Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country.'