Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Améliorez la clarté et la fluidité en donnant une phrase complète et en évitant les erreurs grammaticales. Utilisez un sujet clair, un verbe conjugué et une brève précision (par exemple l'âge ou le type de vélo). Limitez la réponse à 1–2 phrases naturelles et sans hésitations.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it when I was about seven and used it to ride around my neighborhood every afternoon.

提案: Rendez la réponse plus naturelle et plus précise en structurant l'idée principale suivie de raisons claires et d'un exemple. Utilisez des mots de liaison (for example, therefore) et corrigez le vocabulaire (use 'ride' or 'cycle' instead of 'drive' for bikes). Limitez à 2–3 phrases et incluez un détail spécifique (par ex. conditions des routes ou alternatives de transport).

例: I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country because many roads are in poor condition. For example, there are lots of potholes and no dedicated cycle lanes, so most people prefer to use motorcycles or cars instead.

× Yes, when I was young. I. Had child.

✓ Yes, when I was young I had a bike.

The original contains fragments and incorrect word order. 'I. Had child.' is not a complete sentence and 'child' is the wrong noun. Use a complete declarative sentence with the correct object: 'I had a bike.' Keep the tense past simple to match 'when I was young.' Suggestion: combine the fragments, use the noun 'bike' and standard word order Subject-Verb-Object ('I had a bike').

× In my country bikes are not popular because the road and the streets are very bad, so it's very difficult to drive at.

✓ In my country bikes are not popular because the roads and streets are very bad, so it is very difficult to ride them.

Problems include preposition 'drive at' which is incorrect for bicycles; use the verb 'ride' for bikes and no final preposition is needed. Also 'the road and the streets' is redundant and inconsistent; use plural 'roads' or 'roads and streets'. Match verb 'ride' with object 'them' or specify 'a bike.' Maintain present simple tense for general statements. Suggestion: use 'ride' for bicycles and correct noun plurality and pronoun reference.